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Research Paper- Civil Rights Movement
Topic: _____ROSA PARKS______
*Information from OUTLINE à Paragraph- Rough Draft
*Conclusion
o Wrap up topic
o The Montgomery Bus Boycott Movement of 1955 led by Rosa Parks has proved that segregation on any level is immoral and unjust. All people should have the equal right to use all forms of transportation and sit where they please. Segregating individuals due to their race is unacceptable. This powerful historic movement in Alabama showed the world what injustices existed during this time period and how there needed to be a change.
o Re-state thesis
o Rosa Parks was a daring woman who exemplified the importance of fighting injustices, and within time, one can make a difference.
o Lessons learned
o Injustices against anyone is wrong
o Rosa Parks has proven that standing up for what is right can change the world for the better, even as one person.
o People must come to support others in need of a rightful cause
o Rosa Parks made advancements in the Civil Rights Movement for equal rights of blacks in the United States.
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MODEL CONCLUSION*
The Montgomery Bus Boycott Movement of 1955 led by Rosa Parks has demonstrated that segregation on any level is immoral and unjust. All people should have the equal right to use all forms of transportation and sit where they please. Segregating individuals due to their race is unacceptable. This powerful historic movement in Alabama showed the world what injustices existed during this time period and how there needed to be a change. Rosa Parks was a daring woman who exemplified the importance of fighting injustices, and within time, one can make a difference. Do we ‘sit’ there and be a bystander to unfair actions or do we stand up and make a change? Rosa Parks has proven that standing up for what is right can change the world for the better, even as one person. It is also important to recognize the significance of others supporting a rightful cause. Rosa Parks made advancements in the Civil Rights Movement for equal rights of blacks in the United States. As peace activist and great philosopher, Mohandas Gandhi, once said, “You must be the change you wish to see in the world” (Edberg 1).