Harris/English 101Lesson Plan Class 7
17 tu / Revision: word choice. Sentence combining: coordination. Comma splices and run-on sentences. Discussion of movies. T / H10-H14- call roll.
- discuss the movie. Call on several people to read their response papers.
- lecture on paper 2, the web site evaluation. Go over my work on the atomic tourism site.
- Show them my web site: nuclear.htm
- Give example of what paper 2 should do using the bureau of atomic tourism site:
- Tell what type of site it is: list of sites (each site contains description of the site, signed articles giving details of
- overview
- what you’ll see
- how to get there
- public tour dates and times
- related links
- Describe site contents
- atomic museums (14)
- sites of atomic explosions (7)
- related links (3)
- evaluate site
- currency: when was site last updated—sept. 2001
- author: no information found
- testimonials (optional): several reviews and web awards listed atop first screen (reviews don’t know who authors are either)
- broken links or graphics
- titan missile museum by The Center for Land Use Interpretation
- catalog of nuclear explosions
- high energy nuclear archive has new url
- answer questions on topic handout
- what attracted you to this site? The idea of playing tourist at an atomic site.
- How big is the site? Estimate number of pages. Approx 21 (one page per site listed links not included in count). If you choose a large site, you’ll need to focus on one or two specific parts of the site rather than trying to write about the whole site. Remember the size of your assignment.
- Is the site for/against/neutral about nukes? Neutral. How can you tell? No slanted language. Presentation is straightforward and objective.
- What is the most interesting, unusual, or bizarre piece of information on the site? The greenbrier link since it is somewhere I could drive to in a day to take the bunker tour and bikini atoll tour, where it is assumed that all visitors are scuba divers.
- How up to date is the site? See above.
- How reliable is the information presented on the site? Very. All these places exist.
- you’ll need to organize the information from your site into a logical pattern that you think will interest your audience.
- word choice: exercise 16-1/16-3. go over words, exactness, connotations, appropriateness.
- collect response papers 2, 3.
- introduce sentence combining: subordination.
- fragment quiz (done last).