Thesis Statement
· captures the whole argument in one sentence, usually near the end of the introduction.
· is focused and specific enough to be proven within the paper.
· provides a framework for the paper, outlining the scope, purpose, and direction.
What does a thesis do?
takes a position on an issue—a stance that is argued and supported throughout the paper
serves as a "map" to follow, keeping the paper (and reader) focused on the argument.
becomes a reference point for all topic sentences/paragraphs in support of the argument.
anticipates the question(s) about the topic, so the writer can offer enough detail for the reader to understand why the thesis is true.
Working and Final Theses:
A working thesis guides the writer's investigation into the subject, suggests questions that need to be answered, and strategies for arriving at a clear position. It is useful in early drafts.
Ex: “Most of the characteristics of a ____ born child, such as ______, ______, ______, and ______, (apply/do not apply) to me.
The questions this will answer: Is birth order theory accurate based upon my personality? Do the explanations provided by this theory for why I might (or might not) fit the traits of my birth order fit with my experience?
A final thesis should be present in the final draft. It generally comes after an introduction to the topic (i.e. birth order theory in general) and subtopics (i.e. character traits) explored in the paper, and it is the result of revisions done to the working thesis.
Ex: “Given that most of the characteristics of a ____ born child (apply/do not apply) to me, birth order theory appears to be an (accurate/inaccurate) predictor of personality.”
Examples: Good Final Statement or Working Thesis Needing Improvement?
1. Jackie Robinson was the first African-American to play major-league baseball.
2. Being involved in sports or other after-school activities can prevent teens from dropping out or developingcriminal records.
3. Is the term "Native Americans" the same as "Indians"?