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Virginia Komenda
English 98
Date
Persuasive Biography Essay 1
My dad’s hard work and dedication to his business along with his vital importance of our family makes him the most successful person I know.
1. (Revised) My dad’s dedication to his business which he created right out of college on his own and his importance of our family makes him not only a great father but a successful entrepreneur as well.
2. (Narrative Topic Sentence) I can recall almost every summer where my dad would make us go on our yearly family trip; it didn’t matter what we did or where we went because my dad would always make sure we had fun.
3. (Argumentative Topic Sentence) My dad’s company is not only successful in terms of business; his ability to create a software program that can be prosperous enough to create a company around is very impressive.
4. (Analysis Topic Sentence) Without my dad’s support I’m not sure I would be where I am today, the foundation he has set up for me has given me the ability to get through just about anything.
Professor Komenda
English 98
3/11/15
Thesis: He is at his a hardworking man he wakes up at four in the morning and gets home at eleven at night, loving father because even though he is exhausted from a long day at work he still gives his little girls his love attention and though he might not be successful in the definition of rich and famous he has accomplished things in his like that make me wonder how he did it and if he ever felt like giving up on his family and that is was makes my father a successful man.
Topic sentences:
1. Narrative: In this world today you have to work hard to support your family financially even if it means sleepless nights and days. I have always seen my father be a very hardworking man, the only time I see him is at night when he finally gets home from work.
2. When you think of success you think of someone that made it to the big world with lots of money but in my definition of success I think of all the things my father has accomplished in his life.
3. Analysis: My father has always found a way to show us his happiness and careens even if inside he just wants to rest.
English 098
March 9, 2015
Thesis: In 1976 Steve came to the United State from a small town from Greece with only dollar fifty in his pocket and became a successful person, by accomplish his dream to learn how to speak english;opening two successful restaurants with his hard work ethics, and keeping a positive mindset to flourish a better future for his family; and being a very motivated person with his friends and family. Topic Sentence:
1. Learning to be a successful person Steve knew that he had to work at it,to never give up on his dreams and to learn as much as he could with his errors in life.
2. For many years Steve struggle learning how to speak english, he knew that he had to accomplish that to success in the Untied State to be an american citizen.
3. Having a positive mindset Steve work hard, by working two jobs so that he could give his a family a better future and to have the two restaurants business that he has now.
4. Steve has always be a motivated person with his family and friends, he gave great advice to people to do better in their life by using his life experience.