Rubrics for writing: AP Spanish LanguageToubman

This rubrics was designed by Patricia Smith and revised by E. Toubman in the fall of 2007

9/10 Demonstrates Superiority

  • Fully addresses and completes the task
  • A very well developed, organized, and relevant essay that convincingly and explicitly reacts to all sources required
  • Analyzes, synthesizes, and integrates the texts without summarizing texts individually
  • Treatment of the topic is relevant, thorough, and well organized
  • All or almost all information is accurate
  • Demonstrates insight or originality
  • Accurate social and/or cultural references included
  • Control of a variety of structures and idioms. Occasional errors may occur, but there is no pattern
  • Rich, precise, idiomatic; ease of expression vocabulary
  • Excellent command of conventions of the written language (orthography, sentence structure, paragraphing and punctuation)
  • Register is highly appropriate

7-8 Demonstrates Command

  • Appropriately addresses and completes the task
  • A well-developed, organized, and relevant essay that explicitly reacts to the required sources
  • Synthesizes and integrates the sources without summarizing the texts individually
  • Treatment of the topic is relevant and well developed
  • Information is generally accurate
  • Generally accurate social and/ or cultural references included
  • May show originality or insight
  • Synthesis of information outweighs summary or mere quotation
  • Evidence of control of a variety of structures and idioms, although a few grammatical errors may occur; good to very good control of elementary structures
  • Considerable breadth of vocabulary
  • Conventions of the written language generally correct
  • Register is generally correct

5-6 Demonstrates Competence

  • Addresses and completes task
  • Refers to most if not all the sources in the essay
  • Attempts to synthesize, but commentary is relatively superficial
  • Treatment of topic is relevant
  • Information is generally accurate, although there may be some inaccuracies or lack of precision
  • Generally appropriate social and/ or cultural references included
  • Individual summaries or quotations outweigh synthesis
  • Students paraphrases information, without giving own opinion
  • Essay is organized with adequate cohesiveness
  • Errors may occur in a variety of structures
  • Appropriate vocabulary; occasional second language interference may occur
  • May have errors in the conventions of written language
  • Register is generally appropriate

3-4 Suggests Lack of Competence

  • Partially addresses and/ or completes task
  • Essay is so general that it suggests that the student has not adequately understood the question and/or the sources
  • Essay may only refer to some but not all of the sources
  • Inadequately organized
  • Little or no synthesis of information
  • Treatment of the topic may be irrelevant
  • Information may be limited or inaccurate
  • Inaccurate social and/or cultural references may be included
  • Frequent grammatical errors may occur even in elementary structures; there may be some redeeming features, such as correct advanced structures
  • Limited vocabulary; frequent second language interference may occur
  • Frequent errors in the conventions of written language may be present
  • Register may be inappropriate

1-2 Demonstrates Lack of Competence

  • Does not complete the task
  • Essay is chaotic, confused, disorganized
  • The response indicates a lack of understanding
  • Refers poorly to only one or two of the sources in the essay
  • Information is very limited and mainly inaccurate
  • There may be no synthesis of information
  • Inaccurate social and/ or cultural references included
  • Numerous grammatical errors impede communication
  • Insufficient vocabulary; constant second language interference
  • Pervasive errors in conventions that may interfere with communication
  • Minimal to no attention to register

0 No credit

  • Blank paper, off-task or meaningless response
  • Written in a language other than Spanish
  • Restatement or rewriting of the topic or information in the sources