Mrs. Miller#2 (40)Rubric Assessment
Mrs. Miller, p.1(10)Grammar
English 7
4 October 2010
Everything In Its Place
If a person were to follow me around for a day, they would learn a great number of things about my complex personality. They would see how I interact with my kids, how I storm through my day, and what I like to do in my free time. It would be simple to highlight some of my stronger attributes, or characteristics. Another simple way to open the door to my personality is to tour my bedroom. My bedroom easily tells a stranger that I am organized, athletic, and a voracious reader(3 Part Thesis)
One way that my room is an excellent indicator of
my personality is its organization. There is NO clutter in the room and everything has a place. There are baskets for organizing small items and shelves for stacking all of my clothes in piles according to color. I force myself to maintain order in my space. It is pristine, pile-free, and tidy!
Another way that my room mirrors my personality is through the many running-related paraphernalia located throughout the room. There are several pairs of sneakers, a wrist GPS for logging miles, pictures of my running team, and several trophies. My room clearly indicates that running is one of my hobbies.
A third way that my room gives a clue to my inner self is through the pile of books on my nightstand. The books waiting to be read are an indicator that I love to read,find great peace in reading, but do not get as much time for it as I would like!
My bedroom is a clear reflection of my favorite hobbies, running and reading, and of my penchant for neatness! There are many, many layers to my personality waiting to be discovered, but my bedroom gives a quick snapshot of some of the most important parts of me!