Eighth Grade REALISTIC FICTION
Writing Checklist
Realistic Fiction:
  • has a modern or recent time-setting
  • are real-life stories
  • could really happen

Content/Ideas
Is the writing engaging?
Is my writing based on a recent time and/or setting?
Does my main idea (topic) stand out and have good support?
Could this really happen?
Am I believable as a writer?
Does the writing have developed relevant details and examples?
Do I use details that paint a picture/sensory details?
Do I have a rising and falling action?
Have I included conflicts:
Person versus self
Person versus person
Person versus nature
Person versus society
Person versus technology
Organization
Do I have a beginning, middle, and end?
Do my transitions move the reader smoothly through the text?
Are my transitions interesting and improve my story?
Do my events follow a logical order?
Do the details run smoothly throughout my writing?
Do I need to take out details/examples that DO NOT support my central idea/story?
Does my writing usethese grammar techniques correctly?
Infinitives (the word to plus a verb)
Gerunds (The verb ends in -ingand functions as a noun.)
Participial phrases (The verb is used as an adjective, most often ends in -ing or
–ed, placed as close to the noun it describes as possible.)
Dashes or ellipses (Double dash--used to indicate a break in writing to explain
the previous portion of the sentence, or in the place of parenthesis. Ellipses . . .
shows a missing piece of text or a pause in speech.)
Voice/Style
Do my words convey the intended message, were they carefully chosen and thoughtfully placed for impact?
Are my words interesting, specific, and natural?
Does the topic come to life and does the writing make you feel something?
Does my writing and dialogue convey feelings, convictions, and personality?
Does my writing include
Humor?
Element of surprise?
Personification?
Can my reader see what I am writing?
Do I use some short, medium, and long sentences?
Do my sentences start and end differently once in a while?
Did I consider who my audience is, how they read, and what they like?
Do I convey my feelings, convictions, and personality?
Conventions
Did I use capitals correctly?
Are my periods, commas, question marks, and quotation marks in the right places?
Are my words spelled correctly?
Did I remember to indent each paragraph?
 Is my writing neat and easy to read?