The Kent Stater Copy Editing Test

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Copy edit the story below according to proper AP style and Kent State-specific names. If you have suggested re-writes for particular parts of the story, include those as well. Write a headline.

Renovations of Cunningham Hall improve energy performance

Major facility repairs are nearing completion in Kent State's Cunningham Hall that address the building envelope, life safety systems, HVAC system replacements and building electrical infrastructure systems.

The first phase of work, which includes a new ADA elevator and lobby addition, started last September. It was completed at the start of this semester.

Michael Bruder, executive directorof facility, planning and design, said this renovation incorporated new energy-saving windows, which is a part of the university's Energy Conservation Project.

The Kent Campus Energy Conservation Project enables Kent State to reach the 20 percent energy savings goal established in Ohio's House Bill 251.

“We are replacing the old glass windows with the isolated polycarbonate unit that will be more energy efficient,” Bruder said.

Polycarbonate windows are glass made of polycarbonate plastic. The composition of polycarbonate creates properties that make it hardto crack, break or chip.

This increases the safety of building occupants from burglars, gunshots and hazardous outdoor weather.

Selected instruction laboratories were completely renovated. All the upgraded laboratories equipped with energy-saving windows from floor to ceiling.

Hannah Ratterman, a senior zoology major, said the new technology makes Cunningham Hall nice and more comfortable.

Melissa Davis, horticultural facilities director, said the visible classrooms could improve the learning environment, as well as enhance the safety.

“The light is going to be better, which will enhance the learning process,” Davis said, “If sometimes we have problems or serious incidents, you have a way to look out into the world and bring the world into the learning facility.”

This renovation also replaced all paper towels with energy efficient hand dryers.

When will this project be done?