Buckeye Valley High School
General Writing Rubric – Writing Across the Curriculum

Categories / Below Expectations / Approaching Expectations / Meets Expectations / Exceeds Expectations
Focus of Topic/Claim /
  • Response veers off-topic multiple times or generally lacks focus
  • Does not offer a clear or consistent perspective on the topic
  • Audience and purpose are unclear and/or misunderstood
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  • Response may be vague at times or occasionally trend off-topic
  • Provides a general perspective on the topic but may lack consistency at times
  • Audience and purpose may lack focus or clarity at times
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  • Response stays focused on the prompt throughout the writing
  • Provides a clear perspective on the topic
  • The audience and purpose is clear and generally consistent
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  • Targeted response that never veers from the prompt
  • Provides a specific and thoughtful perspective on the topic
  • The audience and purpose is explicit and effectively maintained throughout

Development
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  • Uses little to no pieces of info. to answer the prompt
  • Generally uses weak, irrelevant, or inaccurate examples/details that may not even answer the prompt
  • Provides no significant clarification of how the ideas/details relate to or expand on the topic
  • Does not adequately expand on or prove a point(s) about the topic, or may simply repeat ideas, thus showing little understanding or application of the information
  • Sources are not used or are used in a significantly deficient way to respond to the prompt (if applicable)
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  • Uses some valid info (i.e. quotes, data, facts, primary/ secondary source info.) to answer the prompt
  • Uses some examples & details which may lack the relevance or specificity needed to address the topic well
  • Some ideas/details may only be vaguely related to the topic
  • May be somewhat unclear or redundant when discussing the topic, thus showing some lack of understanding or depth of knowledge
  • Sources used may lack reliability or be over-used without sufficient understanding of how they relate to or expand on the topic (if applicable)
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  • Uses adequately specific pieces of info (i.e. quotes, data, facts, primary/secondary source info.)to answer the prompt
  • Uses generally effective examples & details to discuss the topic
  • Relates most ideas/details to the topic in a clear way, although occasionally lacking full explanation
  • Expands on or proves point(s) about the topic with a generally accurate understanding and application of the information
  • Sources used are reliable and appropriate to the topic (if applicable)
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  • Uses thorough, specific pieces of info (i.e. quotes, data, facts, primary/secondary source info.)
to directly answer the prompt
  • Uses the most effective examples & details to examine the topic
  • Clarifies relationships between all ideas/details and how they relate to the topic skillfully
  • Expands on or proves point(s) about the topic with insight, depth, and command of the information
  • Sources used are highly reliable and skillfully targeted to specific aspects of the topic (if applicable)

Cohesion & Organization /
  • General lack of transitions to link sentences or ideas
  • Sentences are generally choppy and over-simplified
  • Confusing organizational pattern or substantial inconsistency in hoe ideas and details are presented
  • Lacks logical order of ideas or lacks paragraphing by topic/main idea
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  • Noticeable need to use more transitions to link sentences/ ideas
  • Sentences may be somewhat choppy or ideas may seem somewhat disconnected
  • A logical order of ideas is inconsistently applied or is not maintained throughout the entire writing; or, organization of ideas may be somewhat confusing
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  • Most ideas linked fluidly using a variety of transitions with varying degrees of sophistication
  • Most ideas are presented in a logical order that is consistent and generally effective for the topic (general-to-specific, compare/ contrast, problem-solution, order of importance, chronological…)
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  • All ideas linked fluidly using a variety of sophisticated transitions
  • All ideas are presented in a logical order that is entirely consistent and most effective for the topic (general-to-specific, compare/ contrast, problem-solution, order of importance, chronological…)

Writing Conventions & Technical Skills
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  • Significant errors that cause re-reading or confusion
  • Significant & frequent awkward phrasing
  • Errors in conventions that are frequent and obvious, thus indicatingsignificant carelessness in editing and/or deficiency in basic writing skills
  • Sources are generally not credited and/or citations are frequently missing or formatted without consideration of standard guidelines (if applicable)
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  • Some errors that cause re-reading or misunderstanding
  • Awkwardness that may indicate a pattern of sentence-level skill deficiency
  • Some errors in conventions that indicate a carelessness in editing or pattern of some skill deficiency or misunderstanding
  • A source may not be credited and/or some citations which lack adherence to standard guidelines (if applicable)
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  • An occasional error that is noticeable, but does not interfere with understanding
  • Occasional awkwardness or misuse of conventions (spelling, punctuation, capitals, complete sentences, clarity, verb use, correct word use)
  • Sources are credited and generally cited with attention to standard guidelines (if applicable)
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  • No major errors that impede fluency or understanding
  • Editing shows careful use of writing conventions (spelling, punctuation, capitals, complete sentences, clarity, verb use, correct word use)
  • Sources are credited and cited correctly using standard guidelines (if applicable)