Name: ______

Vignette Rubric – AC

10 points / 10 / 8 / 5 / 0
Metaphor / Correctly uses 1
Original; strong example / Metaphor is used but just the basic structure-no deep thought / Used a cliché or example we have already gone over; has 2 items with incorrect structure / missing
10 points / 12 / 6
Figurative Language / Correctly uses 2 / Correctly uses 1
20 points / 18 / 12 / 6
Sensory Details / Correctly uses 3 / Correctly uses 2 / Correctly uses 1 / missing
20 points / 20 / 16 / 14 / 10
Brushstrokes / Correctly uses 4 / Correctly uses 3 / Correctly uses 2 / Correctly uses 1
16 points / 16 -14 / 13 – 11 / 10 – 8 / 7
Mechanics / No errors to two errors in spelling, usage, and mechanics. / Three to five errors in spelling, usage, and mechanics. / Six to eight errors in spelling, usage, and mechanics. / Nine or more errors in spelling, usage, and mechanics.
24 points / 24 – 22 / 21 – 19 / 18 – 16 / 15 – 12
Focus or Controlling Idea / The structure is clearly focused on the purpose, audience, and context, with no extraneous details or inconsistencies. Well-chosen details clearly support the focus, enhancing the reader’s comprehension. / The structure is appropriate to purpose, audience, and context, with no extraneous details or inconsistencies. Details do support the focus, aiding in the reader’s comprehension. / The structure is lacking in at least one area (purpose, audience, or context). The structure may include some extraneous details or inconsistencies, and some that also do not support the focus. / The structure does not clearly define the purpose, is not written for the proper audience and does not include adequate context. Details do not support the focus and many are extraneous or inconsistent.

Comments: TOTAL = ______