PASSION PARAGRAPH RUBRIC
(rubric continues on back side)

Criteria / Outstanding--4 / Satisfactory--3 / Needs Improvement--2 / Lacking--1
Paragraph Skills
(20) / ·  Paragraph is clear and address audience
·  Strong hook
·  Has a strong, clear topic sentence which expresses the main idea
·  Has 3 or more supporting details/ examples with elaboration.
·  Includes an effective concluding statement: quote, emphatic statement, or call to action. / ·  Paragraph is clear and addresses the audience
·  Ok hook
·  Has a clear topic sentence which expresses the main idea
·  Has at least 3 supporting details with limited elaboration.
·  Includes a concluding statement that is not an effective conclusion. / ·  Has a topic sentence that is unclear or inaccurate
·  Hook is attempted
·  Has fewer than 3 supporting details/ examples
·  Lacks in elaboration
·  May not have a concluding statement / ·  Unclear or absent topic sentence
·  No hook
·  Not enough supporting details OR examples are insufficient to support main idea
·  Very little elaboration
·  May not have a concluding statement
Writing Skills
(20) / ·  No errors with commas and capitalization
·  You express ideas simply and clearly using vivid words.
·  You have eliminated “be verbs”
·  Your sentences are strong, graceful, and suitably varied.
·  Your passion for the subject is clear / ·  Some errors with commas and capitalization
·  You express ideas simply using vivid words.
·  Your sentences are suitably varied.
·  You have a few too many “be” verbs.
·  Your passion for the subject is clear / ·  Several errors with comas and capitalization
·  You repeat the same words and/or some words are unclear
·  Sentences are basically the same
·  Paragraph sounds dead
·  Your paper relies heavily on “be verbs” / ·  Tons of errors with commas and capitalization.
·  You have a limited vocabulary
·  Sentences are all the same
·  Paragraph sounds dead
Topic/Focus
(10)
Format / You stick to one passion and you remain on topic.
Typed, readable font, double-spaced, indented paragraph. Only one paragraph in length. / You stick to one passion and remain mostly on topic. / You list several passions and/or deviate from the topic. / Your paragraph has no clear focus.
Incorrect Format
Passion Poster / ·  Shared with class.
·  Contains your paragraph, name, and at least one picture representing your passion.
·  Items are on poster board. / ·  Not shared with class
·  Does not include a picture.
·  Is not on poster board.