ELA A30

Canadian Poetry Student Handout

Major Themes in Canadian Poetry

  1. Environment and Nature:
  2. man in conflict with nature
  3. romanticizing the beauty of nature
  1. Patriotism:
  2. a new country needed to establish a national pride and an identity
  1. Religion:
  2. the new land was a collecting society for various religions
  3. conflict and learning takes place
  1. Art:
  2. Self expression through the visual arts
  1. Personal Relationships:
  2. Isolation created an appreciation for friendship
  1. Love:
  2. As in all cultures, Canadian poets write about love between men and women and the emotions associated with this love
  1. Death:
  2. Death is dealt with in various ways in Canadian poetry
  3. Death is sometimes personified
  4. Some poets see death as a final event which makes us more aware of life
  5. Death is often depicted as the Mother of Beauty

Introduction to Poetry

Characteristics of Poems

*Concise - They are usually shorter than prose, so words must be carefully chosen and used.

*Express strong thoughts or emotions

*Are not bound by regular conventions of writing - Punctuation, capitalization, indentation, sentence structure, etc.

*Some types of poems have rules of structure - sonnet, limerick, ballad, etc.

*A "paragraph" in a poem is called a "stanza".

*Often rely on figurative language to communicate thoughts and emotions - Figurative language is the contrast to literal language.

*Often make use of rhythm and rhyme.

Understanding Poetry

Read Slowly. Drift with the flow of the poet’s pace.

Read Aloud. Let the poet speak to you with the inflection and tone of your own voice. Listen to yourself.

Read Kindly. Try to get the words to rhyme, the meter to beat and the emotions to emerge. Read in the way you would like that poet to read your work.

Read with an Open Mind. If you feel inclined to disagree with the poet, remember that you have to understand exactly what you disagree with in order to refute it. Don’t “paddle upstream” trying to get the poet to say what you would say or the way you would say it. Remember that this poem has already been written. You can’t change it. If you disagree with it write your own poem. Remember that you can appreciate the expression even when you disagree with the thought.

Reread, Several Times. Be patient.

LITERARY DEVICES and FIGURES OF SPEECH

Alliteration - the repetition of an initial (beginning) sound in a series of consecutive or neighbouring words.

EXAMPLE: The boy bounced the basketball backwards.

Allusion - a reference in literature to something the writer expects us to know(historical, biblical, mythological, etc.)

EXAMPLE: Was the ticking package, wrapped with ribbon and bright paper, a Trojan gift?

Assonance – repetition of vowel sounds usually accompanied by unlike consonant sounds

EXAMPLE: Sounding like an overtone, from some lonely world unknown.

Euphemism - a term substituted for one which may be harsh or offensive, to make it less harsh. EXAMPLE: Passed away – died

Hyperbole – an extreme or clearly intended exaggeration; a conscious overstatement to create a desired effect.

EXAMPLE: His mind was a million miles away

Imagery - the use of descriptive, picture-making words to create mental pictures. - Visual – seeing, Auditory – hearing, Gustatory – taste, Olfactory – smell, Tactile – touch, Kinesthetic – sensation of movement, balance or muscular tension

Irony – a mode of expression in which the intended meaning is the opposite of what is stated, often implying ridicule or light sarcasm; when what happens is opposite to what is expected. EXAMPLE: Do not weep maiden, as war is kind.

Metaphor -A direct comparison of two things without the use of “like” or “as”.

EXAMPLE: Life's but a walking shadow; a poor player, That struts and frets his hour upon the stage.

Onomatopoeia - a word that imitates a sound and suggests meaning. EXAMPLE: Bang, Pow, Swoosh EXAMPLE: The car hissed by on the wet street.

Oxymoron – a term consisting of contradictory elements juxtaposed to create a paradoxical effect. EXAMPLE: loud silence, jumbo shrimp

Personification – when concrete objects such as things, places or animals take on human characteristics -- attributes of form, character, feelings, behavior, and so on. Ideas and abstractions can also be personified. EXAMPLE: The wind whistled outside my door. OR The city was asleep as they drove through the dark streets.

Pun – A humourous play on words, using similar sounding or identical words to suggest different meanings. EXAMPLE: I just fille dup my car with gas – that’s what I call being tankful!

Repetition - duplication of words, lines, or stanzas to achieve an effect. EXAMPLE: Somewhere ages and ages hence.

Satire – A style used to poke fun at, attack or ridicule an idea, vice, or foible, often for the purpose of inducing change

Simile - a direct comparison between two unlike things using "like" or "as". EXAMPLE: She ran like the wind.

Symbol – a person, place or thing used to represent a greater truth. EXAMPLE: Dove – peace

Poetic Terminology

Stanza – a group of lines of poetry arranged according to a fixed plan. Usually contain the same number of lines, meter, and rhyme scheme. Simply put – it is a paragraph of poetry.

Common Stanza forms:

-Couplet – 2 lines

-Triplets or tercets – 3 lines

-Quatrains – four lines

-Sestet – six lines

-Octave – eight lines

Denotation:The literal meaning of a word—the meaning you would find in a dictionary.

Connotation: The emotional meaning of a word—the deeper meaning a word is being used to represent. For example, “house” and “home” are literally very similar, but their connotations are very different. A house is just a building, while a home is the place you belong and where your family is. “Home” has a different emotional effect than “house” does.

Pathos: that element in literature that stimulates pity or sorrow

Tone: The author’s attitude toward the subject being written about. The tone is the characteristic emotion that pervades a work or part of a work – the spirit or quality that is the work’s emotional essence

Types of Poetry

Narrative Poetry – the poem tells a story (has setting, characters, plot, resolution, and a strong theme)

1)Ballad – a narrative poem with a song-like form that usually tells a love story, historical event, or heroic tale. Lengthy. Usually told in third person. Discusses a single incident.

2)Legend – Long narrative poem used to explain the existence of something. Usually based on real people or places. Has a mythical quality.

Lyrical Poetry – a form ofpoetry that expresses powerful emotions and personal feelings

1)Free Verse – a form of modern poem that does not follow a set rhythm

2)Sonnet – a fourteen line poem that usually follows a set rhyme scheme and rhythm. Two popular forms

  1. Shakespearean Sonnet – 14 lines made up of 3 quatrains and 1 couplet; thyme scheme ababcdcdefefgg
  2. Petrarchan/Italian Sonnet – 14 lines made up of 1 octave and 1 sestet

3)Ode – a poem dedicated to praising the value or virtue of something

4)Elegy – a poem that laments the loss of someone or something

5)Haiku – Japanese poetic form that consists of three lines and a total of 17 syllables, 5 7 5. Focuses on nature. Often captures a moment in time/nature.

6)Limerick – a kind of humourous verse of five lines, in which the first, second, and fifth lines rhyme with each other, and the third and fourth lines, which are shorter, form a rhymed couplet.

7)Concrete – a poem whose shape or visual appearance contributes to its meaning

8)Descriptive Poetry – uses memorable descriptions to appeal directly to our senses. These poems engage our minds, hearts and imaginations

9)Villanelle – A French verse form calculated to appear simple and spontaneous but consisting of nineteen lines and a prescribed pattern of rhymes

10)Light Verse – a variety of poetry meant to entertain or amuse, but sometimes with a satirical thrust

Types of Rhyme

Rhyme – the repetition of the same sound in different words

Rhyme Scheme – the pattern of end rhymes used in a poem. Usually indicated by letters (eg. Abba, bcbc, de,de)

End Rhyme – rhyme that occurs at the end of lines

Ex. A speak that would have been beneath my sight

On any but a paper sheet so white

Internal rhyme – the rhyming or two or more words within a single line of poetry

Ex. The deep cut, rough and angles seeped into his grin.

Exact rhyme — also called a full rhyme, perfect rhyme, or true rhyme — is when the later part of the word or phrase is identical sounding to another

Imperfect rhyme -rhyme in which either the vowels or the consonants of stressed syllables are identical, as in eyes, light; years, yours.

Also called half rhyme, slant rhyme, near rhyme

Rhyming couplet: Two successive lines of poetry that will rhyme and commonly have the same meter (open – cannot stand alone; closed – can stand on its own)

Words to know about Rhythm

Rhythm – the pattern of beats (accented and unaccented, or stressed and unstressed syllables) in a line of a poem. Rhythm is usually created through repetition of a particular pattern, and gives many poems a musical quality.

Foot (plural feet) – a group of syllables forming a metrical unit; contains one stressed syllable and one or two unstressed syllables; a long diagonal ( / ) is used to show the end of each foot

Poetic metre – the rhythmic structure of the poem – the way it sounds when read aloud. The rhythmical pattern resulting from the arrangement of stressed and unstressed syllables; several syllables are linked together in groups called feet; a line of poetry is usually made up of several feet.

Blank verse: Blank verse is a form of poetrythat does not rhyme, but has a regular meter. Each line has the same (or close to the same) rhythm of stressed and unstressed syllables and words. A popular meter used in blank verse is iambic pentameter.

Iambic pentameter: A specific poetic meter. A line of iambic pentameter has exactly ten syllables, and the first syllable is unstressed. The line follows this pattern: unstressed, stressed, unstressed, stressed, etc. Here is an example by Shakespeare, with the stressed syllables in bold: “Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?”

Common metres

Monometre – 1 foot/lineTetrametre – 4 feet/lineOctametre – 8 feet/line

Dimetre – 2 feet/linePentametre – 5 feet/line

Trimetre – 3 feet /lineHexametre – 6 feet/line

Common Rhythmical Patterns

Iamb (Iambic foot) u / - unstressed stresses pattern

u / u / u / u / u / u /

Ex. I canI’ll on / ly stop / to rake/ the leaves / away

Trochee (Trochaic Foot) / u – stressed unstressed pattern

/ u / u / u / u

Ex. Happysing a / song of / six pence

Spondaic – all stressed

/ / / / / /

Ex. Slow Spon/dee stalks;/ strong foot

“I'm a Canadian “by Duke Redbird

I’m a lobster fisherman in Newfoundland
I’m a clambake in P.E.I.
I’m a picnic, I’m a banquet
I’m mother’s homemade pie
I’m a few drafts in a Legion hall in Fredericton
I’m a kite-flyer in Moncton
I’m a nap on the porch after a hard day’s work is done
I’m a snowball fight in Truro, Nova Scotia
I’m small kids playing jacks and skipping rope
I’m a mother who lost a son in the last Great War
And I’m a bride with a brand new ring
And a chest of hope
I’m an Easterner
I’m a Westerner
I’m from the North
And I’m from the South
I’ve swam in two big oceans
And I’ve loved them both.
I'm a clown in Quebec during carnival
I'm a mass in the cathedral of St. Paul
I'm a hockey game in the forum
I'm Rocket Richard and Jean Beliveau

I'm a coach for little league Expos
I'm a babysitter for sleep defying rascals
I'm a canoe trip down the Ottawa
I'm a holiday on the Trent
I'm a mortgage, I'm a loan
I’m last week’s unpaid rent
I’m Yorkville after dark
I’m a walk in the park
I’m a Winnipeg gold-eye
I’m a hand-made trout fly
I’m a wheat-field and a sunset
Under a prairie-sky
I’m Sir John A. MacDonald
I’m Alexander Graham Bell
I’m a pow-wow dancer
And I’m Louis Riel
I’m the Calgary Stampede
I’m a feathered Sarcee
I’m Edmonton at night
I’m a bar-room fight
I’m a rigger, I’m a cat
I’m a ten-gallon hat
And an unnamed mountain in the interior of B.C.
I’m a maple tree and a totem pole
I’m sunshine showers
And fresh-cut flowers
I’m a ferry boat ride to the IslandI’m the Yukon
I’m the Northwest Territories
I’m the Arctic Ocean and the Beaufort Sea
I’m the Prairies, I’m the Great Lakes
I’m the Rockies, I’m the Laurentians
I am French
I am English
And I'm Métis
But more than this
Above all this
I am Canadian and proud to be free.

Comprehension and Reflection

  1. What is the poet attempting to do by repeating the phrase, I'm a.... ?What significance do these words have?
  1. Is this a complete and accurate view of Canada? Why or why not?
  1. Duke Redbird is Ojibway and was born on the Saugeen Reserve near Owen Sound, Ontario. Why does he then identify himself with other people and things in his poem?
  1. What is the poet's overall message in the poem?

“The Lonely Land”

--A.J.M. Smith

Cedar and jagged fir

uplift sharp barbs

against the gray

and cloud-piled sky;

and in the bay

blown spume and windrift

and thin, bitter spray

snap

at the whirling sky;

and the pine trees

lean one way.

A wild duck calls

to her mate,

and ragged

and passionate tones

stagger and fall,

and recover,

and stagger and fall,

on these stones -

are lost

in the lapping of water

This is a beauty

of dissonance,

this resonance

of stony strand,

this smoky cry

curled over a black pine

like a broken

and wind-battered branch

when the wind

bends the tops of the pine

like a broken

and wind-battered branch

when the wind

bends the tops of the pines

and curdles the sky

from the north.

This is the beauty

of strength

broken by strength

and still strong

”The Lonely Land” – SmithName: ______

Poets use various literary techniques to convey their ideas and feelings. These techniques include the choice of speaker (the poet or character or thing created by the poet which acts as the voice of the poem), form (free verse, sonnet, ...), sound devices (rhythm, rhyme, onomatopoeia, alliteration, consonance, assonance), imagery, and figurative language. Although images can appeal to any of the five senses - sight, hearing, smell, taste, and touch - the majority of images are visual, stimulating pictures in the reader’s mind.

As you read the poem, record the images and your impressions on the poem.

Study Guide

1. What thoughts and feelings about Canada and the land does this poem elicit?

2. What is the predominant quality that Smith has presented in this ”lonely land”?

3. What mood of nature do the words of the poem describe?

4. How do the verbs and images in the first two stanzas contribute to the impression of strength?

5. What does Smith mean in the following lines:

There is the beauty

of strength

broken by strength

and still strong?

6. What does he mean by ”a beauty of dissonance”?

7. What qualities of ”human” character does the poem define in terms of the landscape? Is this truly Canadian? To what extent, if at all, does the statement in the last stanza apply to Canada or the majority of Canadians?

A Critical Response

1. Is Canada really a ”lonely land”?

2. What might be more successful in creating a statement on Canada?

3. Consider the use of imagery in the poem. How would the impact of this poem be different if the poet directly stated his position on the subject?

“The Provinces” – A.M. KleinName : ______

Pre-Reading

Klein describes the physical feature of nine of the ten provinces of Canada. He then attempts to find the ties that bind the province together as a nation. After describing the vigor, strength, and resources of six of the ten provinces, the poet seeks for the ties that bind all the provinces together into one nation. He wonders if they are to be found in the history, languages, geography, romantic association, and forest wealth of our land.

As you read the poem, consider and answer the following:

  1. What is Klein’s conclusion about how the provinces are bound?
  1. In what order are the provinces described?

During Reading

As you read the poem, annotate the elements of poetry and the figurative language used by the poet, A.M. Klein. Read the poem several times to ensure understanding and application of the TP-CASTT method.

The ProvincesA.M. Klein

First, the two older ones, the bunkhouse brawnymen,

Biceps and chest, lumbering over their legend;

scooping a river up in the palm of the hand,

a dangling fish, alive; kicking open a mine;

bashing a forest bald; spitting a country to crop;

for exercise before their boar breakfast,

building a city; racing, to keep in shape,

against the white-sweatered wind; and always

bragging comparisons, and reminiscing

about their father’s even more mythic prowess,

arguing always, like puffing champions rising

from wrestling on the green.

Then, the three flat-faced blond-haired husky ones.

And the little girl, so beautiful she was named –

to avert the evil of the evil eye –

after a prince, not princess. In crossed arms cradling her,

her brothers, tanned and long-limbed.

(Great fishermen, hauling out of Atlantic

their catch and their coal

and netting with appleblossom the shoals of their sky.)

And, last, as if of another birth,

the hunchback with the poet’s face ; and eyes

blue as the grass he looks upon; and fruit

his fragrant knuckles and joints; of iron marrow: --

affecting always a green habit, touched with white.

Nine of them not counting

the adopted boy of the golden complex, not

the proud collateral albino, -- nine,

a sorcery of numbers, a game’s stances.

But the heart seeks one, the heart, and also the mind

seeks single the thing that makes them one, if one.

Yet where shall one find it? In their history –

the cairn of cannonball on the public square?