Last Year Was My First Year of High School

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Last year was my first year of high school. It was great. I made some awesome friends and was really enjoying high schoolit. It was great being a sophomore girl. All the senior boys pay attention to you. I was really digging the whole senior boy thing.

Two months into my senior year my life was going great. I had a boyfriend[D1] I was going out partying all the time[D2] and my parents had finally become cool[D3]. Life was great. Little did I know that my life was about to take a huge turn. Too bad for me I didn’t know it until it was too late.

On a Friday afternoon I had to go to the bathroom really bad. I was in Spanish class and had to ask the teacher (in Spanish[D4]) if I could use the hall pass. Of course[D5] I am not real good [D6]at Spanish so it took me quite a while to convince my Spanish teacher that I really needed to use the restroom. Finally he excused me.

I ran to the bathroom as fast as I could. Obviously the lunch I ate was not settling with me very well. [D7]I finally got to the restroom and did my business. After I finished I washed my hands and headed back to class. As I was walking back to class I noticed that some people were looking at me kind of funny. I checked my nose to see if I had a booger or something. I didn’t so I kept going.

Now for some reasson that day I was feeling cute and had decided to where a short skirt. Man am I sorry about that now!!! [D8]I walked into class and took the hall pass up to the front of the class where it belonged. As I turned around I noticed that a lot of the kids in my class were laughing hysterically. While my friends had this horrified loojk[D9] on their faces. They were pointing at my skirt trying to tell me something. I looked down and about fainted. My skirt was tucked in side my panties. And that’s not the worst I was wearing Spongebob[D10] panties. I was horrified. I ran out of the class crying.

That weekend I didn’t leave my room. I was mortified. My friends tried to cheer me up but it didn’t work. I never wanted to show my face (or anything else) at that school again. But unfortuanately[D11] my parents had other oplans[D12]. Bright and early Monday morning they were at my door telling me that I had to get over it and go to school. They tried to convince me that everyone had probably forgotten it by then. Yeah RIGHT!!!

As I walked into school that day I knew I was the laughing stock. Every one seemed to be whispering behind my back. As I was putting my books in my locker my boyfriend came up and said “Hey Miss Underpants” I was so embarrassed. He tried to make me feel better but it took a long time. That whole year I was known as Miss Underpants[D13]. After awhile I started not to care. It at least made me popular. (although I would have been happy doing it another way).[D14]

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[D3]What do you mean when you say they have now become cool?

[D4] That could be scary!!!

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[D7]Remind me not to eat in the lunchroom again.

[D8]You will learn to where short skirts won’t you?

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[D10]What is a Spongebob?

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[D14]This is a great story. I am glad it happened to you and not to me! You did a great job of writing how you felt. Overall it was very well written. Make the few minor adjustments and send it back to me. GREAT JOB!!!