November 2014doc.: IEEE 802.11-14/1391r0
IEEE P802.11
Wireless LANs
Date: 2014-11-02
Author(s):
Name / Company / Address / Phone / email
Yongho Seok / NEWRACOM /
CID / Page / Clause / Resn Status / Comment / Proposed Change / Resolution / Owning Ad-hoc
3014 / 1118.37 / 8.6.8.26 / "The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants channel schedule management process." -- badly worded. How do you grant a process? / Reword it so that it makes sense. As I can't determine what the original intended, I can't propose an alternative. / Revised – I generally agree with commenter, TGmc editor to execute proposed changes from 11-14/1391r0 found under all headings which include CID3014 / MAC
Discussion:
"…is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants B process"
The above wording can be searched 4 times in current 802.11REVmc Draft 3.0
"The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants the channelschedule management process." P1065-L41
"The ResponderSTAAddress field is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants the network channelcontrol process." P1065-L62
"The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants channel schedule management process." P1118-L37
"The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that grants the network channel control process." P1120-L42
I agree that the wording is not so good. The intention of this wording is just to say that the Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that responds to the channel schedule management or the network channel control requesting STA.
Proposed changes
CID 3014
TGmc editor: modify P1065-L41 as the following:
The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that responds to the channel schedule management requesting STAgrants the channel schedule management process.
TGmc editor: modify P1065-L62 as the following:
The ResponderSTAAddress field is the MAC address of the responding STA that responds to the network channel control requesting STA grants the network channel control process.
TGmc editor: modify P1118-L37 as the following:
The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that responds to the channel schedule management requesting STAgrants channel schedule management process.
TGmc editor: modify P1120-L42 as the following:
The Responder STA Address field is the MAC address of the responding STA that responds to thenetwork channel control requesting STA grants the network channel control process.
Submissionpage 1Yongho Seok, NEWRACOM