Identify and explain how Lochhead creates a nostalgic tone in For Her Grandmother Knitting any other of her works.
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- For My Grandmother Knitting is a poem that deals with the memories of an aging lady who is reflecting on her past, using imagery of her hands to link the memories
- Some old Photographs tells the story of memories captured in time as if from a photo album, preserved and observed through rose-tinted glasses
- Both poems create a sense of looking back at the past in a positive nature, missing what has been and reflecting on the passing of time, therefore effectively creating a nostalgic tone.
Primary
- Repetition
- “once”
- The word once is repeated a number of times in the poem, indicating that the narrator is looking back wistfully, therefore feeling nostalgic
- There is a continuous image of “hands” throughout
- “the working of your hands”
- The hands have decayed over time and by looking back over how her hands used to be and used to perform, the narrator is using a comparison for her own age, therefore forming a nostalgic feeling.
Secondary
Some Old Photographs
- synaesthesia
- “evocative as scent”
- the narrator’s memories are preserved so well they are unlocking all her senses. This vividness creates a nostalgic tone.
- word choice
- “romance”
- The writer says the dark storm clouds have “romance”, showing that when reflecting on the past everything feels and looks better than it perhaps was at the time: nostalgia.
- allusion
- “starlings swarming”
- This is in reference to a poem by Edwin Morgan called The Starlings of George Square. In this, the starlings are a nuisance but Morgan likes them and finds them uplifting. This reference allows us to see that Lochhead sees beauty within negative memories; is nostalgic.
- enjambment is used throughout the poem
- This creates a sense of flicking between images as one might flick through photographs in an album, reiterating the nostalgic tone created by Lochhead as she is looking back over photos.
- verb tenses and changes in these
- “still-lovely” “laughs”
- These verbs are in the present but the memories are in the past, this reiterates the joy that is in the past and how it is recalled
- contrast
- “drops on a rainmate are sequins”
- Something from the past that isn’t particularly glamorous or spectacular (the rainmate) has been remembered and glamorised (sequins). This makes nostalgia very apparent.