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How to Recognize Unacceptable and Acceptable Paraphrases

Here’s the original text, from eDISCOVER (

BUSINESS TEACHERS provide instruction and practice in clerical and business skills, such as typing, word processing, and bookkeeping. They may lecture in classrooms and also give students the chance for hands-on experience. They generally demonstrate techniques, have students apply them, and provide criticism so students can learn from their mistakes.

Here’s an UNACCEPTABLE paraphrase that is plagiarism:

Business Teachers present information and practice in clerical and business skills, such as typing, word processing, and bookkeeping. The teachers lecture and also give students the chance to experience hands-on learning. They normally show techniques, have students apply them, and provide feedback so students can learn from their mistakes.

What makes this passage plagiarism? Explain.

  • The writer has only changed around a few words and phrases, or changed the order of the original’s sentences
  • The writer has failed to cite a source for any of the ideas or facts

Here’s an ACCEPTABLE paraphrase:

Learning life-skills such as typing, word processing, communication, and bookkeeping is what Business Teachers give to their students. By using a variety of teaching methods, like lecture and hands-on experience, students gain a stronger understands of business skills. Students have the opportunity to demonstrate their knowledge while the teacher gives feedback on their progress (webapps01.act.org, 2006).

Why is this passage acceptable?

  • Accurately relays the information in the original uses their own words
  • Lets the reader know the source of her information

Here’s an example of quotation and paraphrase used together, which is also ACCEPTABLE:

Learning life-skills such as typing, word processing, communication, and bookkeeping is what Business Teachers give to their students. “They may lecture in classrooms and also give students the chance for hands-on experience,” (webapps01.act.org, 2006). Students have the opportunity to demonstrate their knowledge while the teacher gives feedback on their progress.

Why is this passage acceptable?

  • Records the information in the original passage accurately
  • Gives credit for the ideas in this passage
  • Indicated which part is taken directly from her source by putting the passage in quotation marks and citing

Note: if the writer had used these phrases or sentences in their own paper without quotation marks around them, she would be PLAGIARIZING. Using another person’s phrases or sentences without putting quotation marks around them is considered plagiarism EVEN IF THE WRITER CITES IN THEIR OWN TEXT THE SOURCE OF THE PHRASES OR SENTENCES THEY QUOTED.

Strategies for Avoiding Plagiarism

  1. Put in quotations everything that comes directly from the text especially when taking notes.
  1. Paraphrase, but be sure you are not just rearranging or replacing a few words. Instead, read over what you want to paraphrase carefully; cover up the text with your hand, or close the text so you can’t see any of it (and so aren’t tempted to use the text as a “guide”). Write out the idea in your own words without peeking.
  1. Check your paraphrase against the original text to be sure you have not accidentally used the same phrase or words, and that the information is accurate.