Editor's Challenge 1
The following e-mail message contains 30 misspelled or misused words, some of which you looked up in earlier exercises in Chapter 1. Edit the message correcting all errors. When you finish your revision, print the message with a 1-inch top margin. Do not print these instructions. Submit to your instructor if directed to do so.
From:Marissa Pelham <>
To:Heather
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Subject:Thanks for Considering ZyTec Software
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Dear Ms. Martinez:
We are happy to learn from your recent massage that BrooklineSchool is considering ZyTec Software Systems as it's source for educational software. Our softwear, which is being used successfully in many area work places and schools, is designed to be especially user friendly.
When we sell a software system to a school, we take great car to insure that we provide suitable training for the school staff. Some companys provide a short training course for there school staff; however, we recognise that most questions arise long after training sessions are completed. Rather then providing the "hit and run" superfitial training that has become common in the industry, weve learned that the best way to train school staff is to provide indepth training for two teachers from each school. After these too teachers work with our training consultant, they are formerly equipped to act as teacher-trainers who can expertly train you teachers and staff.
Unlike trainers who are available for only a few ours, your teacher-trainers would be available to answer questions and concerns when ever they arise. Further more, ZyTec establishes ongoing relationships with teacher-trainers so that your teachers will all ways have the softwear support that they need.
You will soon be recieving a copy of ZyTec's educational softwear training program guide as well as a copy of one of our training cd's. I hope you will find these resource helpful as you consider ZyTec's educational software. In as much as a number of neighbouring schools are using ZyTec software, you might fine it useful to speak with a teacher-trainer from a near by school district. Please call or write to let me know whether such a meeting is feasable.
All the best,
Marissa Pelham
Senior Marketing Manager
ZyTec Software Systems
Phone: (404) 921-1489
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