May 2004doc.: IEEE802.11-04/0667-00
IEEE P802.11
Wireless LANs
Conference Call Minutes Task Group K May 26, 2004
Date:
May 26, 2004
Author:
Paul Gray
AirWave Wireless, Inc.
1700 El Camino Real Suite 500
San Mateo, CA 94025
Phone: 650-286-6107
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Abstract
Teleconference Minutes for Task Group K.
Detailed minutes follow:
Wednesday, May 26, 2004 – 8:30 AM Pacific
- Chair calls the conference call to order at 8:30 AM
- Attendance Paine, Gray, Kwak, Qi, Smith, Klein, Olson, Johnson, Barber, Black, McGovern
- Editorial Comment Resolution
Resolution of Comments
Comment #72 - Clause 7.2.3.8 – Black
Problem - Update Formatting of Table 11 needs to be addressed.
Remedy – Fix editorial.
Comment – relates to Comment #241
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make the change described above
Comment # 73 - Clause 7.2.3.8 – Johnson
Problem - Delete order 1 and 2 lines since defined in R2003 and fix spacing in order 4 notes.
Remedy - Delete order 1 and 2 information. Delete extra line in Notes of Order 4. Say adding order 4 information or something similar.
Comment – The change marks identify the change – sometimes Editor includes the entire table.
New Remedy – Add the Order 4 information field in Table 11 as follows “…. {leave it to the editor} ….”
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make the change described in new remedy
Comment #74 – Clause 7.2.3.9 – Black
Problem - There needs to be some consistency in the 'notes' column of Table 12. We seem to have 'Included if/shall be included if/shall only be present/is only present'. Also some notes have 'the xxx information element is' some do not.
Comment – See Comment #76
Remedy - Make consistent.
Comment – this should remain open until Table 12 is resolved.
Resolution – open – assigned to Olson/Black
Comment #78 – Clause 7.3.1.4 – Black
Problem - Last paragraph. Remove the word equal in two places. The editorial convention is 'set to 0/1' and not 'set equal to 0/1'
Remedy – Fix editor
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change described above
Comment #79 – Clause 7.3.1.4 – Johnson
Problem - B12 should be" Radio Measurement" instead of Radio Measuremen"
Remedy - Change "Radio Measuremen" to "Radio Measurement" for B12
Resolution – decline
Comment #80 – Clause 7.3.2
Problem - Change "Insert Element ID 43-44" to "Insert Element ID 43-45"
Remedy - Change "Insert Element ID 43-44" to "Insert Element ID 43-45"
Comment – This is related to something we addressed in Garden Grove to put “TBDs” in the draft.
Comment – This was address in Comment #81.
Question – Did Comment #81 addresses which element IDs or every new element ID. Answer – every instance where there is an ANA number.
New Remedy – See comment #81.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described in New Remedy.
Comment #82 – Clause 7.3.2.21 – Black
Problem - Parallel bit bullet. Replace 'shall indicate' in first sentence with 'indicates'. This is consistent with the remaining bullets and for the editorial conventions for frame formats.
Remedy - Fix editorial
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described above.
Comment #83 – Clause 7.3.2.21 - Johnson
Problem - Make sentence p10, l6-8 clearer
Remedy - Change to "The Measurement Request field shall be empty when the enable bit is set to 1. The Measurement Request field shall contain one or many measurement requests as described in 7.3.2.21.1 through 7.3.2.21.10 when the enable bit is set to 1.
Comment – The current draft does specify null P10, L6.
Comment – This text is imported TGh with changes underlined.
New Remedy - to "The Measurement Request field shall be empty when the enable bit is set to 1. The Measurement Request field shall contain one or many measurement requests as described in 7.3.2.21.1 through 7.3.2.21.10 when the enable bit is set to 0.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described in New Remedy.
Comment #84 – Clause 7.3.2.21 - Paine
Problem - Next to last paragraph: change "though" to "through"
Remedy - Next to last paragraph: change "though" to "through"
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change described above
Comment #86 – Clause 7.3.2.21.4 – Black
Problem - Table 0-2 last column would be better as 'Valid Channel Numbers'
Remedy - Fix editorial
Resolution – accept – instruct the editor to make change described above
Comment #88 – Clause 7.3.2.21.4 – Johnson
Problem - Delete error reference
Remedy - Delete error reference
Question for editor – is there enough information to make the change?
Resolution – decline – already correct in latest draft
Comment #90 – Clause 7.3.2.21.4 – Olson
Problem – Description of channel number was re-written and voted on in the last review but somehow did not get into this version.
Remedy - Replace with the agreed upon re-wording "Channel number indicates the channel on which the receiving STA shall carry out the measurement".
Comment – same as #85 that came for TGh
Comment - #85 is not as complete as Tim’s which was already voted in.
Comment – the measurement station “may” not carry out the measurement – stated “shall”
Comment – By refusing the measurement the station is carrying out the request.
Resolution – decline – no action required
Comment #91 – Clause 7.3.2.21.4-7.3.2.21.8 – Olson
Problem – Channel band description is missing a reference to the channel band table
Remedy - Add the reference
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described in comment #87
Comment #97 – Clause 7.3.2.26 – Johnson
Problem – Fix Figure 0-3
Remedy – Increase width for measurement period so t doesn't carry to next line and correct spelling of Threshold/Offset
Resolution – decline – because it relates to the word document and not .pdf
Comment #98 – Clause – 7.3.2.21.6 - Johnson
Problem - Reword p12, l20-22
Remedy - Change two sentences to "BSSID is the BSSID of an individual STA or the broadcast BSSID for which a measurement is requested."
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described above.
Comment #99 – Clause 7.3.2.21.6 – Johnson
Problem – Correct p 13, l2
Remedy - "measurment" should be "measurement"
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described above.
Comment #100 – Clause – 7.3.2.21.6 - Johnson
Problem – Correct p 13, l4
Remedy – "a s" should be "as"
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes as described above.
Comment #101 – Clause 7.3.2.21.6 – Johnson
Problem – Table X-1
Remedy – Change Heading from "Measurement Time Unit" to "Time Unit"
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above
Comment #103 – Clause 7.3.2.21.6 – Johnson
Problem - Reword p13, l22-23
Remedy – Make "The Time Unit subfield defines the time unit for the Interval subfield as show in Table X-1
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above
Comment #105 – Clause 7.3.2.21.6 – Johnson
Problem - Remove extra space in Reporting condition 0
Remedy - Remove extra space in Reporting condition 0
Resolution – decline - because it relates to the word document not .pdf
Comment #106 – Clause 7.3.2.21.6 – Johnson
Problem - Remove p 15, l7
Remedy – Remove p 15, l7
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above
Comment #112 – Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Black
Problem - Reference to Figure 0-6 on P16, L24 missing
Remedy - Correct reference - see also comment on figure numbering in the draft.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described above
Comment #115 – Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Black
Problem - P17, L6 and L8 both have 'shall be set equal to' Remove 'equal' for correct editorial style
Remedy - Use 'Shall be set to'
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above
Comment #116 – Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Black
Problem - Table 0-2 as referenced on P17, L11 and used for the table of medium sensing types is used previously on P11, L10 for the channel bands.
Remedy - Replace with a unique identifier within a consistent Table numbering scheme for the draft.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described above and in comment #241
Comment #117 - Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Johnson
Problem – Remove extra space in Reporting condition 0
Remedy - Remove extra space in Reporting condition 0
Resolution – decline – comment related to the word document and not .pdf
Comment #118 - Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Johnson
Problem – Widen randomization Interval so n doesn't carry to next line
Remedy - Widen randomization Interval so n doesn't carry to next line
Resolution – decline – comment related to the word document and not .pdf
Comment #119 - Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Johnson
Problem – Reword p 17, l10
Remedy - Change sentence to: "The Medium Sensing Measurement subtype indicates the subtype of the Medium Sensing Time Histogram measurement."
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above.
Comment #120 – Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Johnson
Problem - Table is already defined
Remedy - Table 0-2 is the Frequency band definitions table. Make this something unique.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make changes described above.
Comment #121 – Clause 7.3.2.21.9 – Johnson
Problem – RPI Threshold not defined
Remedy – Define RPI Threshold in this section. Could define as in Medium Time Sensing Time Histogram Report. Also is RPI an RSSI or RCPI measurement?
New Remedy – copy the RPI definition from 7.3.2.22.9 into 73.2.21.9.
Resolution – accept – instruct editor to make change as described in New Remedy.
Chair officially ends the meeting at 9:31 AM.
Minutes TGk page 1Paul Gray, AirWave Wireless, Inc.