Transcript-Leanna Tamburello
Coding:
· Yellow Highlight: Reading Prompt
· Red Highlight: negative comments/frustration
· Green Highlight: Questioning myself/the prompt/ or asking any questions
· Pink Highlight: Talking out loud about paper
· Grey: Distractions
· Blue: Talk of word count
· Black: Excitement due to assignment
*Reading prompt* okay…uhm…so my phone is going to die. F**K..omg my phone. And I lost the page for Tonys article so this is starting out great.facebook. Okay page, where is the page. All right. 196 *Reading Prompt* Im going to compare Tony, Murray, and someone from Roses *typing * uhm…pretty little liars starts in five minutes omg and im going to miss it.check tv guide. So first I wanna describe Tony *reading prompt* describe Tony and write how I fit into his process and then ill do that for each person I pick??? 750 words OMG I feel like that spongebob episode. I don’t even know if this needs to be double spaced or what? *silence * nope single spaced. Okay so…Tonys writing was, hold on I need to find my notes. I don’t even know which notes they are. What day was that on? * ughhhhhhhh * Dammnit that isn’t even this chapter where the efff are my notes.
Alright now im going to start.
I cant think of anything. * Mumbling* I have to find tonys writing styles, they are in my notes. * reading book* blah blah blah … * reading* Well where are my notes about tony, and what page is Murray on.
Brother walks in room…. “This sucks Kevin” huh? I cant hear you?
Brother: tell your teacher I said hi
She is not going to hear this
Well do you have to write everything
Anything distracting
*ten minute quiet conversation with my brother….cant hear it*
Get out I have to write this I have nothing on my paper but my name
All right im going to start with Murray b/c I have my notes on him right here. So ushhhhhhh how the hell am I gonna write 750 words. * start typing* “Many writers…. I didn’t even realize I have to right this in essay format, I need my thesis, omg my computer is not even plugged in. * reading prompt*
two minute silence* uhmmmmm * mumbling* what elseeeee. *Typing* I dont even know how many words I have because the prompt is on here. Im gonna check my instgram because someone liked my picture. I have only been recording like like15 minutes omg. reading prompt … texting… *reading over what I have written * shit I have to get my binder *left room for little while*
so I found my tony notes. Im not going to write Roses yet idk who to pick. Ill do tonys first. What is my phone doing. Tonys writing process… *writing about tony* *Mumbling* awww shit. *checking instagram* *Rereading what I have written * *writing* I feel like Tony I have to reread everything to even know what I wrote. I feel like I am being recursive right now, like writing a list. *Typing* Tony plans writes edits plans writes edits… OMG this is not going to be enough. I only have 100 words. Ridiculous. *Typing* Tonys rule confusion…autocorrects…oohhh I can use this quote for this paragraph sweet. How does my freaking phone keep unplugging. I need to fix all of these words that are f*cked up. I guess I have to edit as I go like Ruth. *Mumbling/Typing* This is on page 208 nice. Do I need to write this entire quote omg, it will make up for some word count. “Hi”…(someone walked in room) *Text message* does my citation go in the quote??? I don’t think so. Idk. Ill look it up. *Facebook* omg 148 words I feel like I have wrote a fucking novel. Forget it, im taking a break. I need to stop texting shit is distraction. Omg what if my voice recording just deletes and I have to do it all over again. How do you spell ‘apposed’ App or Opp idk I think opp. Wooo only 600 words left. Not. I guess I can put quotes and and the codes in Perls article and shit. changing first sentence of essay.
“dog comes in room” Brunoooooo awww youre so cute. *Typing* *talking to mom * Reread what I just wrote. Wow I can not spell. I really have to beef up my first paragraph…im gonna go back to my fist paragraph..* typing* I don’t even know what Im gonna write for Murray. I wonder who im most like…definitely not freakin murray cause I waited last minute. Im definitely going to fail my bio test…Hypotonic is less solute more wat….why am I thinking about my science I need to finish. Omg my phone keeps on unplugging. *Typing* * Silence* *More Typing* I feel like I shouldn’t be making differences when I am trying to compare should I? whatever. Do I have to say all this stuff out loud that I am typing? Like every word? Im not gonna talk and type ill say my thoughts though. This sucks it is hard. I was going to say Murray had to record “this” assignment but I guess my audience wouldn’t know what “this” assignment is, only Ms Martinez would right? I feel like I am just making bullet points and being recursive. 264 words? Nice! 28 minutes ive been writing that’s it!? “Bruno come here” Idk how I can make this longer..* talking to dog* maybe I can find some quotes. What page though? I don’t even know why I underlined this sentence. Where the eff is…oh I found it! (laugh) *silence*
Where is the parts about his 8 drafts? Omg this is so annoying. *Facebook* maybe Ms Matinez will see I was trying to look for all this shit and could not find any freaking quotes ughhh omg.! I wonder if we turn this in like tonight? *check canvas*. I cant find the quote I want this is pissing me off. I have to drive home a whole hour back to Orlando tonight omg I hope this is not the final draft. I am so tired. What is the prompt again? *Reading Prompt* I don’t even know what egocentric means, oh do I think about my audience. I guess I will go back and edit a little bit of this one paragraph. *Looking up definition for egocentric.* Stupid puppy you are typing on my paper. Sit down! *talkig to brother* I cant believe I have to write everything I said in this recording it is 52 minutes that is going to take forever. *Typing* yay I have 518 words! Okay so I think I am done, well no I have to write my conclusion. *Typing* I have been writing so long I have never changed my style so I guess I could say im happy with it cause ive never failed right? Wooo I just killed like 100 words for my coclusion yay. Woooo I am done! Byebye!