Writing Mentor Process Piece

Writing Mentor Process Piece

For your writing mentor, choose an author you like—either someone we’ve done this semester in the mentor text assignments, or someone whoseNONFICTION work you admire independently. This example is a LONG version of what I expect from you – your paragraphs need only be a few sentences long, so please don’t feel like you need to go into quite this kind of depth. The annotations on the side show you what I want you to do.

How to Write Like Ian Fleming [MG1]

by William Cane

Bond. James Bond.[MG2]

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Ian Fleming did more than create a fictional character named James Bond. He was the creative spark that ignited an industry of films, songs, and spy culture that has spread around the globe[MG4]. The night before his assassination, President Kennedy was reading a James Bond novel. So was Lee Harvey Oswald. 007 is one of the most recognized symbols in the world. The success of Fleming's books is due, in part, to the suspense and the exciting subject matter. But another large part of Fleming's genius is his often overlooked fondness for sumptuous detail. Not only was Fleming passionate about getting the details right, but more often than not the details he includes are those that excite the senses and reflect a world in which pleasure for the sake of pleasure is the goal of life.

As a matter of fact, Fleming, the lastborn of two boys, was a Sybarite, a writer devoted to luxury and pleasure. He retired to a hideaway on Jamaica's North Coast after the Second World War, and there he wrote the books that made his reputation[MG5]. Casino Royale was the first, followed by eleven more Bond novels. While in Jamaica, Fleming used a gold-plated Royal de Luxe typewriter, smoked Morland Specials incessantly, and drank to excess. His appreciation of the pleasures of life was mirrored in his literary style, which relied on generous descriptive passages, exotic settings, and colorful characters. The Fleming style, which he consciously adopted and employed in all his work, includes details calculated to excite the senses and give readers a taste of luxury and hedonism. In order to write like Ian Fleming, try using some of the techniques he found so effective:

• Describe food in detail, but make sure it's good food.
• Have your characters drink plenty of alcohol.
• Include sensuous details about clothes.
• Let your characters take time to relax and enjoy themselves now and then.[MG6]

These techniques are evident on almost every page of Fleming's novels. I just openedFrom Russia With Loveat random and came upon the scene in which Bond is sitting in DarkoKerim's office in Istanbul. "There was a knock on the door and the head clerk puta china eggshell, enclosed in gold filigree, in front of each of them and went out. Bondsipped his coffeeand put it down.It was good, but thick with grains." [MG7]The passages I underlined contain the kind of sensuous detail that Fleming is famous for. Little touches like this add a realistic feel to every scene — but this is more than simple realism in the style of Zola or Sinclair Lewis, writers who drag us down into the mire of life at its worst. Fleming's sensuous details elevate the mood, stimulate the senses, and invite us, vicariously, to taste life at its best[MG8]. You can use the same techniques in your fiction and nonfiction to add vitality to your work. You may not be writing about James Bond, but your characters can certainly live the sensuous life — to their benefit and to the delight of all your readers.[MG9]

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[MG1]Title it “How to Write Like (Your Writing Mentor Here)

[MG2]Begin with an iconic quote from your writer. Bold this.

[MG3]Photograph of writing mentor

[MG4]Characterize your writer’s impact on the literary world in the first short paragraph.

[MG5]Give me a brief bio about your writing mentor

[MG6]Bullet your how-to list…show the process!

[MG7]Another quote, this time a longer one that indicates the writer’s style

[MG8]Analysis of the quote…where do you see the author’s style here?

[MG9]How writing like your mentor may benefit the reader

[MG10]Book cover of author’s most famous work OR a magazine/blog/etc. where author publishes