Wounded Warrior -10

Wounded Warrior -10

I am very proud of you for changing your group iBook so many times and finally you did it. Your iBook looks professional and it is pleasing to the eyes.

Nice introductory video. You have good suggestions in your iBook for the Wounded Warriors.

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I could not understand what does the picture in page 4 has to do with plan of action. Also if it is only one picture why you used Gallery. The format needs to be fixed too. You have one word after the picture.

Nice charts in page 6 but I did not see the relevance of them to the Monitoring in Page 5.

The conclusion section should not be about what your organization is foing. It should be about the plans that you (marketing firm) have for Wounded Warrior.

DoSomething -10

Nice Video

I like your proposal from chapter 4 where you started telling them what to do.

You have appropriate pictures in your iBook

Great review section.

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• Needs Improvement:
• Chapter one change the title to About Dospmething. There is no US.
• In chapter 2, you start with, “They have ways for adults 26 and up to get involved with the organization; such as, donating, sponsoring a campaign, and applying to be a mobile volunteer. ” It is confusing to the reader. In Chapter one was “us” and Here is “they” as we have repeatedly talked about it during the semester must be “you”.

• You did not follow the requirements in Capstone project file that I posted on the Blackboard. Your chapters in your iBook are not the same as the requirements.

• What is the purpose of chapter three. You are telling the CEO of the company about their company’s history? By the time they are CEO I am sure they know their organization history very well.

• I do not see that you have follow the suggestions and discussion about the iBook. Your iBook is full of history of what they are doing and not what they need to do.

Alpha King _ United Way -0

Great intro video

The design of your final iBook was great and it was packet with information

Lightspeed0 +30 Make a wish

A great intro video

You have modified your iBook a few times but you final did it! Good job. I love the number of different widgets that you used in your book.

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Daring Design +10 Girl scout

You guys were in the right track from the beginning. 

I loved your introductory video. Also, your video in page 7 is so appropriate.

Improvement suggesting

In page 13 do not put the big URL. Always change it to hyperlink. Or at least use short URL.

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