Question 1
During the revising process, the writer should assume the role of the______.

/ researcher
/ reader
/ printer
/ collator
Question 2
After reading your draft, you discover much material that fails to support the thesis statement. In order to salvage this research, you should ______during revision.

/ expand your thesis
/ add more personal content
/ rewrite most of the paper
/ add more charts and tables
Question 3
Examine each paragraph, asking yourself: ______?

/ am I using too much passive voice
/ do the words provide topic support
/ will my reader consider this amusing
/ which font will look more appealing
Question 4
Sentence length should ______.

/ not exceed 10-12 words
/ vary throughout the paper
/ depend upon the subject
/ always be in the range of 15 words +/- 2.
Question 5
Editing helps writers ______.

/ reduce clutter
/ verify research sources
/ find compelling topics
/ think like a scholar
Question 6
Using two colorful marking pens to compare the author’s content with others’ facts and quotes ______.

/ focuses attention on grammar
/ locates the research material
/ illustrates who controls the paper.
/ sharpens the topic focus
Question 7
A ______offers a method to both add sentence-type variety to your report and involve your reader.

/ thought-provoking question
/ compound sentence
/ complex sentence
/ imperative sentence
Question 8
How many errors are can you identify when you proofread the excerpt below?
In selecting a school to attend for oneself or one’s child, there are many variables to consiver. Though the importance of each factor may vary. Depending on individual situation, in general each of this factors deserves consideration: reputation cost, location, and accreditation. Some of these arears are easier to discover information on than others.

/ none
/ 1
/ 3
/ 5
Question 9
The fact that grammar errors can cast a cloud over a well-researched paper is a case for

/ completing a comprehensive outline.
/ spending necessary time on revision.
/ avoiding publication.
/ using primary sources whenever possible.
Question 10
______offer an example of a structural element to help guide your reader and enhance overall meaning.

/ Active verbs
/ Conjunctions
/ Subheadings
/ Questions
Question 11
Why is revision a necessary step in the writing process?
Revision is necessary to make sure that the writer’s thoughts are well organized and can be clearly understood by the reader.
Question 12
Question 13. / What is your personal strategy for revising and editing papers?
First I brainstorm and writing some ideas on paper, next I do an outline so I can begin the organizing process. After that, I start a rough draft while proofreading my rough draft and making sure all my thoughts flow through the paper. Then I do a final draft and again proofread before submitting the final draft.
Answer the following question, and if appropriate, include personal experience as part of your answers.
  • Why is revision and editing an important part of the writing process?
  • Revision is an important part of writing because it allows the writer to become a better writer and the reader to become a better reader. If you revise, it allows the reader to have a better understanding of the message you are sending.