[Recipient Name]
September 26, 2014
Page 1

[Your Name]

[Street Address]

[City, ST ZIP Code]

(Date)

[RecipientName]

[Title]

[Company Name]

[Street Address]

[City, ST ZIP Code]

Dear[Recipient Name]:

Introduction (5pts)

Here you will write who you are, your years of service and an explanation of your job at Six Flags Over Georgia. You will also explain the problem that you are facing, and your desire to have the CTO (Chief Thrill Officer) review your business proposal.

OBJECTIVE (5pts)

Here you explain the objective of this proposal. This means that you will explain to the CTO what the problem is and your proposed solution.

SCOPE OF PROPOSAL (60pts)

  1. How ice cream freezes
  2. Explain phases and phase changes using particle drawings(10 pts)
  3. Show graph of phase changes(10 pts)
  4. Explain and depict heat transfer (for the ice cream) from a particle perspective(10 pts)
  5. Dry ice vs Water Ice for Freezing the Ice Cream
  6. Explain: What is dry ice(10 pts)
  7. Explain: Testing done using dry ice vs water ice. Include the data collected.(10 pts)
  8. Summarize the data collected(10 pts)

BENEFITS(15 pts)

Convincingly, explain to the CTO how using dry ice would solve the customer complaint problems surrounding the ice cream cart business.

CLOSING(5 pts)

Here you will write a statement demonstrating your appreciation for the CTO’s consideration of the proposal.

Sincerely,

[Your Name/s]

[Title]

Also, a part of your grade is the quality of your presentation.

Product Quality (10 pts)

  • Conventions – Spelling, grammar, etc
  • Organization –Proposal submitted in order found on template.
  • Readability – Easy to read, font appropriate, no distracting elements
  • Appropriate formatting–Removed instructions from proposal template and populated all fields with brackets, [ ], on the proposal with required information.
  • Quality appropriate for CTO level audience