End-of-Year Portfolio Final Assessment Rubric

Ideas and Content123456

Does the reader learn something about you? Do you share insights?

Is there a clear and focused topic?

Is there a purpose or reason for you writing this vignette? There must be deeper meaning.

Word Choice 123456

Have you used literary devices? TAKE CHANCES. MAKE MISTAKES.

Have you used sensory imagery?

Have you used sound devices such as alliterationand rhyme?

Organization123456

Do you have a title that illuminates something about the vignette?

Is there a clear beginning, middle, and end?

Is your ending satisfying and insightful?

"Until then, I am a red balloon tied to anchor."

"Temporary, says Papa. But I know how those things go."

"As I took a breath from my cry, I said, 'That's me, that's who I am.'"

Are your paragraphs indented?

Sentence Fluency123456

Do you have a variety of lengths and beginnings of sentences?

Does your writing flow and sound natural

Conventions123456

Punctuation--I have ended every sentence with the correct punctuation mark (period, question mark, or exclamation point).I have used commas and semicolons correctly.

Capitalization--I have begun each sentence with a capital letter. I have used a capital letterfor names of people, places, and proper nouns. I have started each line of dialogue with a capital letter.

Each New Paragraph--I have indented each new paragraph when my thoughts changed from one idea to another and when changing speakers in written dialogue.

Spelling—I have accurately spelled every word and double-checked my vignettes for common spelling errors.

Extra support for the three required vignettes:

#1: The Neighborhood/House/Room on ______Street/Ave/Way, etc.Using “The House on Mango Street” as a model, write a vignette that describes where you currently, have, or hope to live. Make sure you address not only the visual features but also what you think and feel about your neighborhood/house/room.

#2: My NameUsing “My Name” as a model, write a vignette about your name that discusses the meaning, origins, experiences with it, and most importantly your feelings about it. Don’t forget those literary devices.

#3: HairsUsing “Hairs” as a model, write a vignette about your own life that discusses an important physical trait and how it reveals something about the person who possesses it and your relationship to him/her. You may choose to discuss a trait that all of you share, or one that makes a particular family member—or you—stand out from the others because it is different.

And last but not least, make sure to include

Title page with a unique and creative title, your name, and the due date

Illustration or image that ties in to your title

Dedication Page (before the Table of Contents)

Table of Contents

About the Author (after the vignettes)

**I will pass around a sample portfolio in class so that you can see all of the elements put together.**