DAVID BROWN – Music Individual

Great solos, control, excellent job!

Control tones in tuba

I want to hear more woodwinds

Like to energy at end of 1st, difficult to tell pitch on last chord (end of 1st)

Great contribution from pit, great effect!

Beautiful sound on the mello, so mature, natural feel, even more shape to the phrase, check pitch clarinet to horn

Solos are sweet! (picc.)

Mood is perfect

Yeah battery, nice and clean

That strong playing, adjusting quality of sound out of low brass, be careful with impacts for quality, support of sound needs to come from everybody

Timing issues, layering, not easy

Unison line in flute needs to work better

Yeah trumpets, nice sounds, stay with it, yeah, give me all 16ths notes.

Very nice impacts, need more nice sound like from trumpet trombone horn (end of 2nd)

Really tasty sounds in pit, yeah quartet, make sure entrance in perfect

Delicate moment sounds good! Yeah keep it going, crescendos nice

Tuba, watch entrance, move together, articulate clearly, play with confidence, find the tempo and get with it, do not be tentative, oh yeah, great sound.

Open up teeth, open mouth and throat.

Very nice sounds coming out of brass, direction? Make sure everyone releases at same time

Dwahing notes…

Keep it going! (before battery entrance)

Very nice sensitivity in battery, appreciated

We is the music going? Stagnant

Strong brass playing but periodically dwah, articulate clean and clear!

Need to open up a little bit, need even more sound to match energy of music, phrasing

Play with so much control, great training, sound so good, open up sooner (end of 3rd)

Battery, good set-up, back off after horn entrance

Take phrases all the way to the end, great sound, pitch is very nice in brass

Make sure releases are together.

Nice ending, very strong on final note, some brass note endings are ragged

Should be very proud of music you are putting out.

Appreciate show, hope to see you again soon.

JAMIE BENNETT – Music Ensemble

Like the sax solo in the middle, bring up a little more? Closer?

There you go tubas

Timpani needs to be in time

Nice job horn

Sfz, bring out

Nice use of ensemble behind pit, pit providing intricacies, nice

Nice double tonguing section, good job

Good use of tempo change, push all the way through last phrase (end of 1st)

Good use of different sounds from pit

Great tone in horn

Challenging things, make sure we’re lined up, need to be more confident

Really complex writing, performed well, need to be more confident

Nice steady tempo

Tubas don’t need to be more confident, good job guys.

Great timing between trombone and mello crossfield, kudos!

Watch tone quality while marching backfield trombones

Control the body, proper marching tech will help that

Trombone, use air and push through phrases, don’t sound so choppy

Alright trumpets, pay attention to tone quality, intonation (end of 2nd)

Impressive tune, still needs some work, really cool stuff going on there

I like the building on in the pit.

Nice job, quartet, nice balance and blend throughout that

Crescendo together, keep balance through dynamics

Good cresc, there good job, finish phrases as ensemble, define phrases, nice shaping dynamically

Make sure we are going all the way to the end of the phrase

Reenter phrase by sneaking back so its not noticed, common throughout show so far

Adjust intonation with the slide trombones! Listen down, always adjust

Releases?? Define ends of notes

Nice control, balance and blend through section where battery entrances

Lost energy we had earlier in performance

Beautiful song but lost intensity, sloppy releases and attacks, accuracy of pitches. (end of 3rd)

Watch tone quality, nice and powerful that’s great, don’t produce a sound that you can’t control

Nice sound, nice balance, put more energy into the ending!

Really good stuff going on in your show, I think we need to take a look at variety, challenging parts are there, balance and blend not a huge problem, pit is doing a fantastic job, I really enjoyed your stuff, hopefully I get to see you down the road.

TERRY HOLIDAY – Visual Effect

Like the interpretive dance, nice sax solo in the middle, mm hmm

I’d like a little pit flavor (during solo)

Good integration of guard, good visual, music impact not quite there though.

Good tempo change

Guard articulation nice velocity of drill, like segmentation yet able to integrate guard.

Guard has a lot of confidence, good showmanship,

more dynamic contrast would help Good opener nice change (end of 1st)

Like the flavors in the pit. Good dance work

This is working, yeah (horn solo)

Nice WW contribution, nice dance work

Be careful of pulse, like exposure, lots of tone colors, really neat

Yeah guard, interpreted well, good velocity change, good integration, nice dimension

Like the sound of the flag as a musical instrument too. Good job.

Good, nice design, way to integrate the guard, good job

Front to back…, like the double against the sustained

Nice color change, obviously group spends a lot of time on dance work, lots of good dance moves and interpretation

Good ballet type work

Like the visual on the end (end of 2nd)

Nice interpretation

Nice quartet, like the way you’re pulling it all together dancers

Nice balance to the field between horn line and guard

Well written, tough to pull it off, need to have a lot of emotional range in dynamics

Good depth to design, again, excellent interpretation with guard, nice writing, good communication for the most part.

Nice the way that builds

Tough show to really communicate, guard holds together because of the obvious training in dance work, been a tough show to interpret, just missing lots of variety in impacts,

nice change there with the feet(double time to half time), nice push, good build.

Dynamically we need to really do something, to keep the audience attention with music and visual impacts, nice flags, guard is very good, nice depth, nice ending there (end of 3rd)

Good color change,

Good depth with the guard, nice woodwind writing

This in interesting, yes!

Got to push it! Nice design, good guard.

OK velocity, nice drill, nice music, guard lost focus, nice focus back on the solo

Enjoyed the show, tough show, tough to interpret, communicate and sell to the audience.

Great guard enjoyed it!