Comment Resolution Part 1 s1
January 2015 doc.: IEEE 802.11-15/0213r0
IEEE P802.11
Wireless LANs
Date: 2015-01-21
Author(s):
Name / Company / Address / Phone / Email
Jiamin Chen / Huawei/HiSilicon /
Abstract
This document proposes resolutions to TGaj D0.5 CIDs: 6,8,9,10,11,12,25,26,27,28,29,30,37,38,39,41,44,51,53,54,55,65,76,86 and 87.
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Editorial Comments
6 / 8.5.8.31 / 28 / 32 / E / There is a typo in the sentence " ... to the peer STA operating the adjacent 1.08 GHz channel." / change to " ... to the peer STA operating on the adjacent 1.08 GHz channel.". Check and fix the same problem also in 8.5.8.32, 88.5.8.33, 8.5.23.2, …
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to " ... to the peer STA operating on the adjacent 1.08 GHz channel." Do the same where applicable.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark8 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 19 / E / "The monitor phase shall last for at MaxBIDuration"--"for at least MaxBIDuration"? / reword
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to "The monitor phase shall last for at least MaxBIDuration."
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark9 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 35 / E / Typo in "ready to receive transmission from the AP or PCP" and " the CDMG STA". / Change "ready" to "be ready"; Change "the CDMG STA" to "The CDMG STA".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to “ During the suspension phase, a CDMG STA that is scheduled to operate in the alternative channel shall switch to the dedicated channel and be ready to receive transmission from the AP or PCP in the dedicated channel. Tthe CDMG STA may receive the CDMG Beacon frame or Announce frame transmitted”
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark10 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 36 / E / Typo in "If a CDMG STA receives one or more valid DMG or CDMG Beacon frame" / Change it to "If a CDMG STA receives one or more valid DMG Beacon frames".
Proposed resolution: Accept
There is no CDMG beacon defined in 11aj. Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark11 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 64 / E / Typo in "Reason code field" / Change "Reason code field" to "Reason Code field"
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark12 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 65 / E / Typo in " DMG-CTS-to-self frame" / Change " DMG-CTS-to-self frame" to "DMG CTS-to-self"
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark25 / 9.40.1 / 45 / 57 / E / Typo in "two 1.08 GHz channel" / Change "two 1.08 GHz channel" to "two 1.08 GHz channels"
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy. Change to "two 1.08 GHz channels"
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark26 / 9.40.2.2 / 47 / 34 / E / Typo in "PCP STA should be prepare to receive and transmit frames" / Change "be prepare to" to "be prepared to".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to "PCP STA should be prepared to receive and transmit frames"
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark27 / 9.40.2.2 / 49 / 30 / E / Typo in " operating channel is present or not described in 9.40.2.2" / Change "described in 9.40.2.2" to "as described in 9.40.2.2".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change the paragraph to “The scanning AP or PCP shall also use the DBC Option field of Dynamic Bandwidth Control element in each DMG Beacon frame to announce whether the beacon interval on its 1.08 GHz operating channel is present or not as described in 9.40.2.2.”.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark28 / 9.40.3 / 51 / 65 / E / Typo in "or it may to associate with the PBSS" / Change "or it may to associate" to "or it may associate"
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change "…or it may to associate…" to "…or it may to associate…"
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark29 / 9.40.4 / 53 / 17 / E / Typo in "CMDG AP or PCP" / Change "CMDG AP or PCP" to "CDMG AP or PCP". Ditto P53L9.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to “…CMDG CDMG AP or PCP…”
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark30 / 9.40.5 / 54 / 62 / E / Typo in "A CDMG AP or PCP is operating on a 1.08 GHz channel" / Change "A CDMG AP or PCP is operating on a 1.08 GHz channel" to "A CDMG AP or PCP that is operating on a 1.08 GHz channel".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to "A CDMG AP or PCP that is operating on a 1.08 GHz channel … should appropriately reserve and schedule the available…".
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark37 / 10.31.1 / 57 / 36 / G / "...SSW Report information element ..." -- According to the 802.11 Style Guide (11-09/1034r8), elements should be called the "<Purpose> element", where <Purpose> does not include the word "information" (e.g. the "QoS Capability element"). The phrase "information" shall not appear, except in the headings of 8.4.2. / Change "SSW Report information element" to "SSW Report element". Ditto to P57L42 and P107L17.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change "SSW Report information element" to "SSW Report information element". Do the same in P57L42 and P107L17.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark38 / 8.4.2.160.1 / 15 / 64 / G / "...in DMG Beacon and Information request and response frames.". --According to the 802.11 Style Guide (11-09/1034r8), a "formal" reference to a frame should follow the pattern "<name of frame> frame", with the name Initial Caps and "frame" in lower caps. / Change "... and Information request and response frames...." to "...in DMG Beacon and Information Request and Information Response frames..." Ditto P27L29.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change "... in DMG Beacon and Information request and response frames...." to "...in DMG Beacon and Information Request and Information Response frames..." Ditto P27L29.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark39 / 8.4.2.161 / 17 / 12 / E / There is no "CDMG Beacon" defined in .11aj. / Change to "DMG Beacon". Ditto P36L20.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark41 / 8.4.2.164 / 22 / 1 / E / "... DMG Beach frames..." -- There is a typo here. / Change to "... DMG Beacon frames...".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark44 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 11 / G / Misuse "which/that" here. Use of "which" should generally be preceded by a comma or preposition. / Change "which" to "that". Ditto P45L59, P54L43, P76L40, P81L47, P108L24 and P93L3.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Fix the syntax error here. Do as noted in the suggested remedy where applicable.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark51 / 8.3.4.1 / 12 / 9 / G / "The Dynamic Bandwidth Control element is optionally present if the AP or PCP is a CDMG STA."
According to the 802.11 Style Guide (11-09/1034r8), the presence statements should follow this template: "The <name> <type of structure> is [optionally] present [only] if <some condition>". / Change to "The Dynamic Bandwidth Control element is optionally present if the STA operates as an AP or PCP and dot11CDMGOptionImplemented is true.".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy. Change to "The Dynamic Bandwidth Control element is optionally present if the AP or PCP is a CDMG STA STA operates as an AP or PCP and dot11CDMGOptionImplemented is true."
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark53 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 8 / T / The MIB value "dot11OpportunisticTxSupport" is not present in Annex C. And the value "dot11OpportunisticTransmissionsActivated" in Annex C is not present in the txt. / Change "dot11OpportunisticTxSupport" to "dot11OpportunisticTransmissionsActivated",
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy. Change to "dot11OpportunisticTXSupportTransmissionsActivated",
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark54 / 36 / 19 / T / "The monitor phase shall last for at aMaxBIDuration."-- There is a wrong with this. / Delete "at" or change to ""The monitor phase shall last for at least aMaxBIDuration."".
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to ""The monitor phase shall last for at least aMaxBIDuration."".
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark55 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 19 / E / "During the monitor phase, a CDMG STA that is, scheduled to operate in the alternative channel shall listen for the transmission of DMG or CDMG Beacon frames in the alternative channel."
There is no need to use the second comma in this sentence. / Delete the second comma.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Typo. Delete the second comma: "During the monitor phase, a CDMG STA that is, scheduled to operate in the alternative channel shall listen for the transmission of DMG or CDMG Beacon frames in the alternative channel."
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark65 / 8.4.2.166 / 21 / 31 / E / Typo / Change "NP/BH" into "NP/BHI"
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark76 / 8.4.2.161 / 17 / 10 / G / CDMG Beacon frame is not defined in 11aj. / change "CDMG Beacon" to "DMG Beacon", or define CDMG Beacon frame
Proposed resolution: Accept
Do as noted in the suggested remedy.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark86 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 43 / E / The description is not clear / Change to "The AP or PCP shall transmit the CDMG Extended Schedule element in the format of an Announce frame or a DMG Beacon frame, or both frames.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change to "The AP or PCP shall transmit the CDMG Extended Schedule element in either or both the format of an Announce frame or a DMG Beacon frame, or both frames.
CID / Clause / Page / Line / Type / Comment / Suggested Remedy / Remark87 / 9.33.11 / 36 / 44 / T / There is no definition of CDMG beacon frame / There is no CDMG beacon frame. They are all called DMG beacon frame with new added filed.
Proposed resolution: Accept
Change “CDMG beacon frame” to “DMG beacon frame”.
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