CC:DA/TF/Consistency/Area 7/3

15 September 2003; rev. 12 December 2003

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To:ALA/ALCTS/CCS Committee on Cataloging: Description and Access

From:Task Force on Consistency Across Part I of AACR2

RE:Area 7: Proposed Revisions

This document is another set of revision proposals from the Consistency Task Force. It deals with Area 7, Notes. The document consists of four parts:

  1. Summary of Decisions and Issues for Discussion. This section lists some of the major changes proposed, as well as other issues that might be worth discussion by CC:DA. It also includes a list of issues that are deferred for future discussion or referred to some other group for resolution.
  2. The revisions proper. The proposed revisions are marked up in the usual way. Only rules to be revised are included. Prior to each section is a listing of the changes proposed. The rationale for the change is given where it goes beyond consistency. In the revision proposals, the unique rules in Chapters 2–12 are highlighted in yellow.
  3. A clean copy. The clean copy includes all the chapters in Part I (except Chapter 13). Most of the rules included in the clean copies are completely unchanged, and do not appear in the revisions section of this document. They are included in the clean copy for ease of consultation.
  4. Appendix: Analysis of the Area 7 rules. Because the proposal is incomplete, a brief version of our analysis of the X.7B subrules is given in an appendix as a preview of coming attractions and to provide some hint of the full picture. The full analysis is available in CC:DA/TF/Consistency/ Area 7/2on the CC:DA Web site

A. Summary of Decisions and Issues for Discussion

Outline of Area 7 rules: The approach adopted for the prototype is that Chapter 1 will contain a master set of rules covering all aspects of description, and that rules in chapters 2–12 will be numbered to correspond to the rules in chapter 1. The following, then, is an outline of the all the rules for notes that will appear in Chapter 1 (if this aspect of the prototype is accepted):

1.7. NOTE Area

1.7A. Preliminary rule

1.7A1. Application

1.7A2. Sources of information

1.7A3. Form of notes

1.7A4. Notes noting other editions and works

1.7B. Notes

Preliminary notes

1.7B1. Nature, scope, or form

1.7B2. Frequency

1.7B3. Language

Notes relating to the title and statement of responsibility

1.7B4. Source of title proper

1.7B5. Variationsin title

1.7B6. Parallel titles

1.7B7. Other title information

1.7B8. Statements of responsibility

Notes relating to the edition and bibliographic relationships [???]

1.7B9. Edition

1.7B10. Bibliographic history

1.7B11. Relationships with other resources

Notes relating to the material-specific details

1.7B12. Mathematical data [reference to chapter 3]

1.7B13. Digital graphic representation [reference to chapter 3]

1.7B14. Notation [reference to chapter 5]

1.7B15. Numbering [reference to chapter 12]

Notes relating to the publication, distribution, etc.

1.7B16. Publication, distribution, etc.

1.7B17. Place of writing [reference to chapter 4]

Notes relating to the physical description

1.7B18. Physical description

1.7B19. Accompanying material

1.7B20. Supplements [???]

1.7B21. System requirements [reference to chapters 6, 7, 9, etc.]

Notes relating to the series

1.7B22. Series

Other notes

1.7B23. Dissertations

1.7B24. Audience

1.7B25. Access and literary rights

1.7B26. Reference to published descriptions

1.7B27. Other formats [including “published versions” from chapter 4?]

1.7B28. Summary

1.7B29. Contents

1.7B30. Supplements [???]

1.7B31.Indexes

1.7B32. Numbers

Last notes

1.7B33. “With” notes [issued with]

1.7B34. Notes relating to the original

1.7B35. Item described

“Local” notes

1.7B36. Copy being described, library’s holdings, and restrictions
[including “bound with” notes]

1.7B37. Donor, source, previous owner(s) [reference to chapters 4 & 8]

Notes relating to particular types of material

1.7B38. Early printed monographs [2.18]

1.7B39. Ancient, medieval, and Renaissance manuscripts [chapter 4]

Summary of decisions:

The proposals for Area 7 are incomplete. They cover the preliminary rules (X.7A) and the first 11 subrules for specific types of notes. ALA is submitting this incomplete proposal so that it can be included (as far as it goes) into the prototype of revised Part 1 of AACR. This is particularly important because this is the first set of rules (other than Area 3) that will reside primarily in chapters 2–12.

Although comments are welcome, we are acutely aware of how tentative and incomplete these proposals are. We suggest that any responses concentrate on the general rules and on larger issues involving the subrules, rather than on the details. It is our hope to have a more complete proposal for the September 2004 JSC meeting.

Our working assumption has been that the general rules for the note area are confined to the rules on how to make notes in 1.7A.Although there are a few of the X.7B subrules in which there is a fair degree of consistency, we are not yet prepared to argue that these should appear only in chapter 1. So much of the creation of notes is driven by the specific context; we therefore suspect that it may be preferable — in this case — to have all the relevant instructions appear in the individual chapters. This argument should certainly be given careful consideration before a final decision is made. It is at least possible that the present proposal given enough of the picture for a judgment to be made.

On the other hand, we have proposed a general rule in chapter 1 for each type of note. Currently, many of the rules in chapter 1 contain only the caption and a few examples. Given our vision for part 1, we feel it is important that all of the rules be anchored in chapter 1, even if all of the details are given in other chapters.

Issues for discussion:

Rule 1.7A1: The current rule 1.7A5 contains a mixture of disparate statements. The first sentence is a brief statement of the function of notes within the description. We propose to move that statement to be the first preliminary rule, with the caption “Application”:

1.7A1. Application. Notes contain useful descriptive information that cannot be fitted into other areas of the description.

Some Task Force members felt that this was an overly brief statement, and further suggested that we might take the opportunity to restate the function of notes in terms of the FRBR user tasks and bibliographic entities. The result is probably an overly elaborate statement, and one that has no counterpart in other areas of the description. However, we feel that the following statement is worth including for discussion and comment.

1.7A1. Application. Notes contain useful information in addition to that given in the other areas of the description. Notes may be employed to assist the user to:

identify the resource as a particular manifestation;

identify the work(s) and expressions(s) embodied in the manifestation;

identify unique features of the particular copy/item being described;

identify or clarify the persons or bodies responsible for the intellectual or artistic content, physical production and dissemination, or custodianship of the resource, thus justifying the entries assigned to the resource;

select a resource appropriate to the user’s needs, based on significant bibliographic or technical characteristics;

find related resources by indicating the relationship of the resource to other resources and/or the relationship of an aspect of the resource (e.g., as expression) to aspects of other resources (e.g., other expressions of the same work or other manifestations of the same expressions).

For serials, integrating resources, and multipart monographs, notes are also used to describe changes in the resource over time.

General rule: The general rule consists of several parts: (a) an instruction to follow 1.7A in making notes (currently X.2A2), (b) an instruction to follow the X.7B subrules in the particular chapter, and (c) an instruction to make notes in the order of the X.7B subrules (combined in X.2B1). We propose to combine (a) and (b) into a single sentence to appear at X.7A1 in chapters 2–12; we propose to make (c) a second paragraph of X.7A1:

X.7A1. In making notes, follow the instructions in 1.7and in the following subrules.

Give notes in the order in which they are listed in X.7B. However, give a particular note first when it has been decided that note is of primary importance.

Rule X.7B then would consist only of the subrules for specific types of note.

Grouping of notes: The outline of Area 7 rules above includes (in italic) some captions for groups of notes. These groupings are based on the current sequence of notes, much of which is related to the ISBD areas of the description. Thus, after a few preliminary notes, there are a group of notes related to the title and statement of responsibility, followed by a group related to edition, etc.

There are other ways of grouping notes that might be considered. For example, we could use the FRBR categories: notes relating to the work, to the expression, to the manifestation, to the item, notes relating to different types of relationships. Because these groupings also constitute the order in which the notes are to be given in the description, we feel that significant changes should not be made without careful consideration of the consequences. We propose this as a topic for discussion and, in the meantime, retain the present groupings (with a few minor changes).

We do not recommend that the captions for groups of notes be added to the text of the rules. However, this should be considered as a possibility.

We have tentatively split several rules into separate rules. Parallel titles and Other title information have been split, as have Edition and Bibliographic history. Rule 12.7B8, Bibliographic history and relationships with other resources has been split, making a separate rule for Relationships with other resources, which at the moment exists only in chapter 12 (although we recommend adding a general rule to chapter 1). This distinction in particular, as well as the appropriate location for notes on bibliographic relationships within the sequence of notes, needs further examination. If one of our strategies for accommodating FRBR within the rules is to emphasize relationships, then the concept should be applied to all types of material (not just serials) and should be handled with greater consistency. We also note that the role of notes in justifying/explaining added entries — one of the key functions of notes — is fulfilled through the description of relationships. For all of these reasons, this cluster of issues will need a great deal of further work.

Issues deferred for future consideration or referred to other groups:

As noted above, this is a very incomplete set of proposals. Therefore, most of the work has been deferred. The following is a list of a few of the major issues that we have already identified, but set aside for later.

Subrules X.7B12–39 in the tentative outline above have yet to be addressed. Even the outline itself may change as we take up these remaining subrules. For a brief analysis of these rules, see the Appendix to this document.

There are a number of provisions in X.7B1–11 which we are almost certain should be separated out as separate rules. Two significant examples of this are the rules for system requirements and mode of access notes currently in 9.7B1 and the provisions relating to translations and adaptations currently in X.7B3 (Language). These will eventually be deleted from their current position and given a new place in the rules.

Rules for notes are intimately related to rules in other areas of the description. We have not yet explored these relationships. At the very least, we need to check the rule numbers cited in references to X.7 rules. Beyond that, however, we need to look at all of the rules that call for additional information to be given in notes, checking for consistency of language as well as rule numbering.

Some work has been done on the FRBR terminology in the Notes rules, based on 4JSC/Chair/76/Chair follow-up/4/Sec follow-up. The wording in X.7B3, Language and script, has been more thoroughly revised than the other subrules; this issue needs further work. One particular problem that has been identified is the use of “item” in Chapter 4, Manuscripts; this is a standard archival concept (item vis à vis collection) which may or may not correspond to the FRBR definition of the term. Since the item is typically a unique exemplar of a manifestation, the distinction tends to disappear, as does the distinction between notes that apply to all copies and those which apply to the “copy being described.”

Given the tentative nature of the recommendations for X.7B, we have not yet updated any of the references to these rules in other rules. We will do a quick review of the prototype and attempt to make the numbering consistent in that document, but we do not want to change the main proposals until there has been further discussion of the organization of the X.7B rules.

B. Rule Revision Proposals

X.7. NOTE AREA: Contents

  1. Delete the area tables of contents in chapters 2–12.

2.7. Note Area

Contents:

2.7A.Preliminary rule

2.7B.Notes

3.7. Note Area

Contents:

3.7A.Preliminary rule

3.7B.Notes

4.7. Note Area

Contents:

4.7A.Preliminary rule

4.7B.Notes

5.7. Note Area

Contents:

5.7A.Preliminary rule

5.7B.Notes

6.7. Note Area

Contents:

6.7A.Preliminary rule

6.7B.Notes

7.7. Note Area

Contents:

7.7A.Preliminary rule

7.7B.Notes

8.7. Note Area

Contents:

8.7A.Preliminary rule

8.7B.Notes

9.7. Note Area

Contents:

9.7A.Preliminary rule

9.7B.Notes

10.7. Note Area

Contents:

10.7A.Preliminary rule

10.7B.Notes

11.7. Note Area

Contents:

11.7A.Preliminary rule

11.7B.Notes

12.7. NOTE AREA

Contents:

12.7A.Preliminary rule

12.7B.Notes

X.7. NOTE AREA: Punctuation rules

  1. Renumber the punctuation rule in chapter 1. Delete the punctuation rules from chapters 2–12.

1.7A15. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

2.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

3.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

4.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

5.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

6.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

7.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

8.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

9.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

10.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

11.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

12.7A1. Punctuation

Precede each note by a full stop, space, dash, space or start a new paragraph for each.

Separate introductory wording from the main content of a note by a colon followed but not preceded by a space.

X.7A. NOTE AREA: Preliminary rules

  1. The first sentence of 1.7A5 has been moved to 1.7A1. The final sentence has been moved to 1.7A3. The remaining sentences of 1.7A5 has been deleted.
  2. The rule from 12.7A2 about information that does not apply to the entire resource has been added to 1.7A3, Form of notes. This information applies to multipart resources as well as to serials and integrating resources and is therefore appropriate in chapter 1.
  3. The rule from 12.7A2 about citation of other resources has been moved to 1.7A4, where it replaces the current language there. The instruction from chapter 12 makes it clear that title or name/title citation is to be preferred over title proper / statement of responsibility.
  4. The general rule in chapter 2–12 has been renumbered as X.7A1.
  5. The special rule for rare books has been retained (2.18, not reproduced here; see clean copy).
  6. Rule 11.7B1 about a combined note on the original has been deleted. This applies to all reproductions, not just microforms and is covered in 1.7A4 (Notes relating to items reproduced).

1.7A1. Application. Notes contain useful descriptive information that cannot be fitted into other areas of the description. [moved from 1.7A5]

Notes may reflect changes in the resource over time. [moved from 12.7B1]

1.7A3. Form of notes

Order of information. If data in a note correspond to data found in the title and statement of responsibility, edition, material (or type of publication) specific details, publication, etc., physical description, and series areas, give the elements of the data in the order in which they appear in those areas. In such a case, use prescribed punctuation, except substitute a full stop for a full stop, space, dash, space.

Adaptation of: Germinie Lacerteux / Edmond et Jules de Goncourt

Originally published: London : Gray, 1871

Revision of: 3rd ed. London : Macmillan, 1953

When giving names or titles originally in nonroman scripts, use the original script whenever possible rather than a romanization (see 1.0E).

Based on: <hfnmz Rfhfvfpjds / A. V. Ljcnjtdcrbq

Applicability. If it is known that the note does not apply to the entire resource, add an identification of the applicable part(s), such as numbering or publication dates.
[moved from 12.7A2]

Quotations. Give quotations from the item or from other sources in quotation marks. Follow the quotation by an indication of its source, unless that source is the chief source of information. Do not use prescribed punctuation within quotations.