Writing by Laughing Lilly
Nouns in the Park
Growing flowers, growing flowers in all colours for us to see.
Blue sign, blue sign showing us where to go.
Green flax, green flax growing for us to see.
Wood bench. Wood bench sitting there waiting for us.
Nouns- Activated and Extended
Blond hair, Blond hair waving in the wind.
Hazel eyes, Hazel eyes shimmer as the sun shines.
Dotty freckles, Dotty freckles dotted everywhere.
Beautiful clothing, beautiful clothing, dresses that sway.
Character Description
My sister Daisy is the funniest person I know.
She has blond hair that waves in the wind. I like the way she scruffily wears her merino tops and peach tights as she runs around the house. Her cute white round nose sniffs at the air. Her long nails and tiny body are a perfect fit.
Daisy runs around the house crazily.
She carries her snugly as she screams at the top of her lungs. Outside she runs alone and hides. If she falls over she just laughs.
Daisy is noticed by many people when it comes to people coming over. When she hears the doorbell she gets me and drags me over to the door and opens it. Daisy laughs at whoever is in the doorway. Dad yells, “Daisy get back from the door. “ After a while, she lets me go. “Thank you.” I say.
Daisy likes playing in her room. What she does is, she gets her teddies and puts them on her bed and dances on her mat. When I’m in there it sometimes smells like flowers. She likes stuffing all her toys into the one corner. My job is tidying up. And that’s Daisy, my Daisy!!