Typescript Form for Miscue Analysis
Book Title: Ruby Lu, Brave and True
Author: Lenore Look
1. The best thing about living on 20th Avenue South was everything.
2. Ruby like her house.
3. She had lived there since kindergarten.
4. Tomato slugs lived at the bottom of the front steps.
5. A plum tree lived in the backyard.
6. The kitchen smelled like jook and ice cream.
7. Ruby liked the rain.
8. It rained often on 20th Avenue South.
9. The rain sprinkled diamonds on spiderwebs and poured silver on the sidewalks.
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10. At night the rain was a lullaby of a billion grains of rice falling on the roof.
11. Ruby liked the sunshine.
12. It was not often sunny on 20th Avenue South, but when it was, all the bottle caps in the street shone like coins.
13. Windows opened.
14. Radios played.
15. Laundry dried.
16. Plums ripened.
17. Mothers took their babies out.
18. Ruby liked the bus.
19. The No. 3 ran from Chinatown to the Jefferson Golf Course.
20. Ruby’s pohpoh and gunggung lived in Chinatown.
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21. Ruby lived near the Jefferson Golf Course.
22. The No. 3 bus brought PohPoh to Ruby, or Ruby to PohPoh, whenever GungGung was too busy to drive them, and they saw each other as often as they could.
23. Ruby liked her school.
24. Kimball Elementary was usually four blocks away.
25. But whenever Ruby got the urge, school was nine blocks away: two more blocks over to the driving range to look for golf balls that had come through the fence, three blocks backtracking to school.
26. Ruby was almost eight and was finally allowed to walk to school by herself.
27. She wore lots of reflective tape – just so her mother wouldn’t have to worry, especially on foggy mornings.
28. “Everyone should wear reflective tape,” Ruby like to say.
29. And she got to say this every year at the school safety assembly.
30. Ruby liked her new wallet.
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31. The librarian gave out a shiny wallet to every child who became a card-carrying member of the Beacon Hill Public Library.
32. It was school-bus yellow and closed with crunchy Velcro.
33. Ruby carried her wallet everywhere.
34. It meant that she was almost ready for a driver’s license and credit cards.
35. Ruby could hardly wait.
36. Ruby especially liked after school.
37. Mr. Tupahotu’s magic class began at 3:12 sharp.
38. Ruby was never late.
39. Mr. Tupahotu had been a famous magician before he became a teacher.
40. He turned scarves into butterflies.
41. He floated a beautiful lady in midair.
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42. He owned 513 rabbits (not all at once).
43. He appeared on TV.
44. He signed an autograph for Ruby.
45. The Great Tupahotu was now just a regular guy, but he was not your regular second-grade teacher.
46. He could read a whole Russian novel (without falling asleep) and usually one of Ruby’s book reports (without confusing the two).
47. In addition he could tell who threw the paper airplane just by the way it was folded, and fold a much more impressive one.
48. He knew the difference between a person, place, and thing, except sometimes when it came to Ruby’s imaginative writing.
49. And he could write in cursive, even on the blackboard.
50. In magic class he made everything look so easy.
51. But everything was actually very hard.
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52. Ruby could never do any of the tricks the first time around.
53. Or the second.
54. Or sometimes even the 199th.
55. But she was getting better.
56. She could put a coin through her elbow.
57. She could cut a string into two pieces and then turn it back into one piece.
58. She could hypnotize a handkerchief and make it obey.
59. She could almost make a coin stand up just by blowing on it.
60. She could make knots disappear…usually.
61. And she could make flowers appear…sometimes.
62. Ruby starred in her very own backyard magic show.
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63. Ruby’s Magic Madness.
64. And neighbors on 20th Avenue South agreed that she was truly amazing.
65. Ruby liked her neighbors.
66. Wally lived across the street.
67. Before that he’d lived in Hong Kong.
68. Wally was the only child Ruby knew who could speak Cantonese without having gone to Chinese school.
69. He was fluent, Ruby’s mother said, which meant that he could speak Chinese all day without running out of words.
70. Ruby was very impressed.
71. Still, she was glad when Wally did not sign up for magic class.
72. With a little help from Ruby, he had signed up for Bonsai Club.
73. Tiger was Ruby’s best friend.
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74. He lived two blocks away, but it felt like he lived next door.
75. He was faster than e-mail.
76. “Don’t break the speed limit!” his mother always called after him.
77. He was also fast at making friends.
78. With just the right smile, he was always saying hi and having a chat.
79. Ruby didn’t make friends so quickly.
80. She liked her old friends best.
81. “You never know when a new friend might become another best friend.” Tiger told Ruby.
82. “Just smile and look them smack in the eye.”
83. But the very best thing about living on 20th Avenue South was Oscar.
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84. Oscar was Ruby’s baby brother.
85. When he was brand-new, he felt as solid as wrapped tuna from the Pike Place Market and smelled like fresh-baked daan taht.
86. He was more beautiful than Ruby had imagined.
87. She had waited a very long time for him.
88. And when he came home from the hospital, she had nearly forgotten that she had wished for a puppy.
89. The second very best thing about living on 20th Avenue South was Emma.
90. Emma had the cutest, sweetest little dog.
91. He had a mouthful of pointy teeth and little feet with toenails that went dop-dop-dop whenever he went.
92. His name was Elwyn and he was bilingual.
93. He obeyed commands in Cantonese (thanks to Wally) and in English.
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94. He’d graduated summa cum laude from dog obedience school, and so had Emma.
95. Emma was very proud of Elwyn.
96. And Elwyn was happy to be the only dog on 20th Avenue South.
97. But Emma also had a baby brother.
98. When he was brand-new, he, too, felt like wrapped fish and smelled like something freshly baked.
99. Sam was more beautiful than Emma had imagined.
100. She had waited a very long time for him.
101. And when he arrived, she and Ruby became as close as sisters.
102. Sam weighed 8 pounds, 10 ounces, at birth.
103. So did Oscar.
104. Sam scored a 9.5 out of a perfect 10 on his Apgar test.
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105. So did Oscar.
106. Sam could tell when it was lunchtime.
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108. When Sam was only two days old, he smiled at Emma.
109. “It’s just gas,” Ruby had explained.
110. “It says here that if babies smile before four weeks old, it’s only because of gas.”
111. That’s what the baby book said.
112. But Emma didn’t believe it.
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114. And Sam smiled back.
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