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MY PLACE
SERIES 2 - EPISODE 17
“1848 JOHANNA”
© 2011 MATCHBOX PICTURES & RUSTY FIG PICTURES
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MY PLACE
SERIES 2 - EPISODE 17 – “1848 JOHANNA”
SHOT DUR VISION DIALOGUE INPOINT
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SCREEN AUSTRALIA
AND
THE AUSTRALIAN CHILDREN’S
TELEVISION FOUNDATION
PRESENT
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A MATCHBOX
PICTURES PRODUCTION
FOR
THE AUSTRALIAN
BROADCASTING CORPORATION
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IN ASSOCIATION
WITH SCREEN NSW
AND
SCREEN TASMANIA
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BASED ON THE BOOK
BY NADIA WHEATLEY
DONNA RAWLINS
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TITLE 5 BEGINS AT 10 00 36 00
My Place
1848 JOHANNA
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THEN FADE TO BLACK / CHILDREN’S VOICES (VARIOUS OOS)
I'm not scared. I'm coming with you to keep you safe. Are there Ghosts? That is so naughty. Let's see who's the real scaredy cat. He is gunna spiflicate you [Laughter and squeal]
MUSIC 1 BEGINS ... 48 SEC / 10 00 00 00
10 00 00 12
> SCENE EXT DAY THE BIG TREE
2 / 7.11 / FADE UP FROM BLACK TO PAN RIGHT OVER SUNLIGHT THRU TREE BRANCH / MUSIC 1 ENDS / 10 00 45 04
10 00 47 23
3 / 20.08 / MONTAGE FAST EDITS JOHANNA CLIMBS LIKE A MONKEY IN TREE AND SWINGS FROM BRANCHES / MUSIC 2 BEGINS ... 31 SEC / 10 00 52 15
10 00 54 23
4 / 8.07 / WMS JOHANNA HANGS UPSIDE DOWN AND SWINGS / JOHANNA (VOICEOVER)
I'm Johanna, and this is my place. If I stay up here long enough, my Auntie Maryann says I'll turn into a monkey. / 10 01 12 23
5 / 4.02 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA SQUEAKS LIKE A MONKEY / 10 01 21 05
6 / 2.16 / HA WMS JOHANNA HANGS FROM TREE AS EDGAR AND CHRISTABEL ENTER SHOT / EDGAR
Get down from there immediately!
MUSIC 2 ENDS
CHRISTABEL
Immediately! / 10 01 25 07
10 01 26 04
7 / 1.15 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA UPSIDE DOWN / JOHANNA
Make me.
EDGAR (OOS)
Listen here. / 10 01 27 23
8 / 1.09 / HA WS EDGAR AND CHRISTABEL WITH WMS REV JOHANNA HANGING / EDGAR
This is our tree / 10 01 29 13
9 / 2.20 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA HANGING UPSIDE DOWN / and you're not allowed up there.
JOHANNA
Says who? / 10 01 30 22
10 / 0.22 / HA WMS EDGAR AND CHRISTABEL / 10 01 33 17
11 / 1.11 / LA TILT WMS PROFILE JOHN TURNS / EDGAR (OOS)
Father! / 10 01 34 14
12 / 2.14 / HA WMS EDGAR EXITS FROM CHRISTABEL AS JOHANNA HANGS IN FG / 10 01 36 00
13 / 1.01 / LA TILT MCU JOHANNA SQUEAKS LIKE A MONKEY / 10 01 38 14
14 / 2.14 / HA WMS CHRISTABEL EXITS FROM HANGING JOHANNA / 10 01 39 15
15 / 0.17 / LA TILT WS JOHANNA IN TREE / CHRISTABEL (OOS)
Father! / 10 01 42 04
16 / 0.24 / WILD TILT UP OVER TREE ROOTS AND BRANCHES / EDGAR (OOS)
Father, that girl’s up / 10 01 42 21
17 / 2.17 / LA TILT MCU JOHANNA SITS UPRIGHT / in the tree again!
JOHANNA (OOS)
How many times have I told you I am not / 10 01 43 20
18 / 7.02 / ELEVATED WS REV CHRISTABEL RUNS TO JOHANNA AND EDGAR / to be interrupted?
EDGAR
But father, look!
CHRISTABEL
But father, look!
JOHANNA
Must you repeat everything your brother says? / 10 01 46 12
19 / 3.02 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA / JOHANNA (OOS)
If it were anything worth hearing, I wouldn’t mind so much. / 10 01 53 14
20 / 3.08 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA AS CHRISTABEL AND EDGAR MOVE PAST HIM / JOHANNA
Get inside. / 10 01 56 16
21 / 3.05 / LA TILT WIDE MLS JOHANNA SITS IN TREE / 10 01 59 24
22 / 3.15 / VIEW THRU LEAVES AS JOHANNA TURNS AND WALKS AWAY / 10 02 03 04
23 / 2.15 / LA TILT WS FEET DROP TO GROUND AT TREE THEN RUN TOW CAM / MUSIC 3 BEGINS ... 44 SEC / 10 02 06 19
10 02 07 04
24 / 5.11 / LA TILT WS REV JOHANNA RUNS TOW TREES IN BG / 10 02 09 09
> SCENE EXT DAY MY PLACE HOUSE
25 / 12.03 / HA WS POTATOES INTO CRATE THEN PULL BACK TO INCLUDE JOHANNA WALKING FROM GRANNY SARAH IN BG
JOHANNA PULLS CART TOW CAM THEN STOPS / GRANNY SARAH
Are you sure you’ve got enough?
JOHANNA
Yes.
GRANNY SARAH
Now Mrs. Banks has twelve potatoes of a Tuesday.
JOHANNA
I know. I've done this a hundred thousand times–
GRANNY SARAH
And the Stocktons have – ... Johanna! / 10 02 14 20
26 / 4.20 / LA TILT WMS REV JOHANNA STOPS THEN TURNS AND WALKS TOW CAM / 10 02 26 23
27 / 6.20 / WMS REV JOHANNA WALKS TO GRANNY SARAH AND KISSES HER CHEEK THEN RUNS BACK TO FG / JOHANNA
Bye, Granny Sarah. / 10 02 31 18
28 / 7.14 / WMS REV JOHANNA PULLS VEGETABLE ALONG ON CART / 10 02 38 13
> SCENE EXT/INT DAY BANKS’ HOUSE
29 / 2.22 / LA TILT WMS PROFILE JOHANNA KNOCKS ON DOOR THEN LEANS AGAINST IT / 10 02 46 02
30 / 1.07 / MCU MAID OPENS DOOR AND JOHANNA FALLS TOW CAM / MAID
Oh, / 10 02 48 24
31 / 1.15 / WMS MAID WITH JOHANNA STRAIGHTENING IN FG / goodness me, it’s Johanna.
MUSIC 3 ENDS / 10 02 50 06
10 02 51 03
32 / 2.07 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA / JOHANNA
Good afternoon, Miss Turner.
MAID (OOS)
What day is it / 10 02 51 21
33 / 3.12 / LA TILT WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / today?
JOHANNA
Twelve potato day.
MAID
Oh, and how’s your gran? / 10 02 54 03
34 / 3.12 / CU REV MAID AND WMS JOHANNA / JOHANNA
Well, thank you.
MAID
Do you know, I still remember her wedding day. / 10 02 57 15
35 / 1.16 / LA TILT WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / MAID
She was the / 10 03 01 02
36 / 2.15 / CU REV MAID AND WMS JOHANNA / most beautiful bride, you know. / 10 03 02 18
37 / 1.15 / LA TILT WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / MAID
And I don’t think I've ever seen / 10 03 05 08
38 / 3.00 / CU REV MAID AND WMS JOHANNA / anyone look happier. Oh listen to me / 10 03 06 23
39 / 1.14 / LA TILT WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / going on and going on. You’ll / 10 03 09 23
40 / 1.18 / CU REV MAID AND WMS JOHANNA / be wanting to get back to your gran. / 10 03 11 12
41 / 4.03 / WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / MAID
Now you wait here and I'll go and get your money. / 10 03 13 05
42 / 39.05 / MONTAGE EDITS MAID EXITS SHOT AND JOHANNA STEPS INSIDE HOUSE TO LOOK AT PAINTINGS
MAN WINKS AT JOHANNA AS HE CLEANS WINDOW AS SHE STARTLES IN FRIGHT / MUSIC 4 BEGINS ... 36 SEC / 10 03 17 08
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43 / 4.24 / LA TILT MCU JOHANNA LOOKS AROUND THEN EXITS RIGHT / MAID (OOS)
It’s Johanna, she’s brung all these spuds. Look at that.
MUSIC 4 ENDS / 10 03 56 13
10 03 57 04
44 / 7.23 / LA TILT WMS REV MAID AND COOK IN KITCHEN THEN MCU REV JOHANNA ENTERS FG / MAID
She’d be ten by now. Oh, she’s starting to look like her father. Anyway, I'd better take this out to the poor lass. She’ll be cooking in this heat, won’t she? / 10 04 01 12
45 / 1.24 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA RUNS OUT FRONT DOOR OF HOUSE / 10 04 09 10
46 / 2.10 / LA TILT MS REV JOHANNA TURNS TOW CAM / 10 04 11 09
47 / 4.17 / LA TILT WMS REV JOHANNA AT FRONT DOOR AS MAID ENTERS SHOT AND HANDS HER COINS AND JAR / MAID
Right. That’s for your gran. / 10 04 13 19
48 / 2.06 / MCU REV MAID AND WMS JOHANNA / MAID
Right.
JOHANNA
Were you at my mother’s wedding, / 10 04 18 11
49 / 2.11 / LA TILT WMS MAID AND MS REV JOHANNA / too?
MAID
Ah, yes yes, ma'am, / 10 04 20 17
50 / 1.19 / LA TILT MCU JOHANNA / I'm coming! / 10 04 23 03
51 / 13.02 / LA TILT WMS MAID CLOSES DOOR ON WMS REV JOHANNA AS SHE TURNS AND PUSHES CART OUT OF SHOT / 10 04 24 22
> SCENE EXT DAY PRIVATE ACADEMY
52 / 6.16 / WS BOY STANDS ON PORCH RINGING BELL THEN KIDS EXIT AND RUN TOW FENCE AS JOHANNA PUSHES CART PAST / 10 04 37 24
53 / 2.07 / LA TILT WMS EDGAR AND OTHERS RUN TO FENCE / EDGAR
Donkey girl! / 10 04 44 15
54 / 2.20 / WMS JOHANNA PUSHES CART TOW CAM / EDGAR (OOS)
Look, she’s even got a donkey tail. / 10 04 46 22
55 / 1.19 / LA TILT WMS BOY AND EDGAR AS JOHANNA CROSSES IN FG / EDGAR
Ha! All red like her face. / 10 04 49 17
56 / 1.12 / MCU PROFILE JOHANNA LOOKS AROUND / EDGAR (OOS)
Donkey face! / 10 04 51 11
57 / 1.12 / WMS REV JOHANNA CLIMBS FENCE AND RUSHES TOW EDGAR / KIDS
Ee-or! / 10 04 52 23
58 / 2.02 / WMS REV JOHANNA TUSSLES WITH EDGAR / KIDS
Fight! Fight! Fight! / 10 04 54 10
59 / 2.12 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA AND EDGAR FALL ONTO GROUND AS THEY WRESTLE / KIDS
Fight! Fight! Fight! / 10 04 56 12
60 / 4.02 / MS EDGAR AND JOHANNA TUSSLE ON GROUND AS HE HOLDS JAR OF HONEY / KIDS (OOS)
Fight! Fight! Fight! / 10 04 58 24
61 / 0.19 / MCU JOHANNA ON GROUND / EDGAR (OOS)
Do donkeys / 10 05 03 01
62 / 0.15 / TILT UP OVER WMS EDGAR / like honey? / 10 05 03 20
63 / 1.04 / LA TILT WMS BOYS / KIDS
Yeah! / 10 05 04 10
64 / 1.05 / MS EDGAR TIPS JAR OF HONEY OVER / 10 05 05 14
65 / 2.08 / HA WMS HONEY ONTO JOHANNA’S HAIR / 10 05 06 19
66 / 3.01 / WMS BOYS LAUGH AND CLAP / KIDS
More! More! / 10 05 09 02
67 / 1.15 / WMS EDGAR POURS HONEY ONTO JOHANNA’S HAIR / SCHOOL MASTER
What on earth’s / 10 05 12 03
68 / 0.15 / LA TILT WMS SCHOOL MASTER WALKS RIGHT / going on here? / 10 05 13 18
69 / 0.17 / WMS EDGAR LOOKS AROUND / 10 05 14 08
70 / 0.24 / LA TILT WMS SCHOOL MASTER / 10 05 15 00
71 / 0.24 / WMS EDGAR / 10 05 15 24
72 / 1.03 / WMS PROFILE BOYS RUN RIGHT AS JOHN AND CHRISTABEL MOVE IN CART IN BG / 10 05 16 23
73 / 2.10 / MHA WMS EDGAR STANDS FROM JOHANNA / 10 05 18 01
74 / 1.17 / LA TILT WMS SCHOOL MASTER / SCHOOL MASTER
Are you a student here? / 10 05 20 11
75 / 1.13 / HA WMS JOHANNA PICKS HERSELF UP / JOHANNA
No, sir. / 10 05 22 03
76 / 1.02 / LA TILT MCU SCHOOL MASTER / SCHOOL MASTER
Then I'll kindly ask you / 10 05 23 16
77 / 0.22 / MHA WMS JOHANNA LOOKS AROUND / to leave school grounds. / 10 05 24 18
78 / 1.03 / WS EDGAR CLIMBS ONTO CART TO JOHN AND CHRISTABEL / 10 05 25 15
79 / 1.15 / HA WMS JOHANNA STANDS / SCHOOL MASTER (OOS)
Be gone with you! / 10 05 26 18
80 / 2.00 / LA TILT MS SCHOOL MASTER / SCHOOL MASTER
Good Lord, give me patience. / 10 05 28 08
81 / 2.24 / WMS JOHANNA WIPES HONEY FROM EYES / 10 05 30 08
82 / 2.15 / LA TILT WMS JOHN CHRISTABEL AND EDGAR MOVE LEFT AS EDGAR POKES TONGUE OUT / 10 05 33 07
83 / 6.15 / MCU JOHANNA LOOKS AROUND / 10 05 35 22
> SCENE EXT DAY VEGETABLE PATCH
84 / 13.08 / WS REV JOHANNA ENTERS SHOT AND TURNS AT CART AS CHICKENS MOVE ABOUT NEARBY / 10 05 42 12
85 / 2.02 / LA TILT WMS JOHANNA / 10 05 55 20
86 / 1.12 / MHA WS GREEN FROG ON TURNIP / 10 05 57 22
87 / 1.15 / LA TILT MCU JOHANNA SMILES / MUSIC 5 BEGINS ... 45 SEC / 10 05 59 09
10 06 00 16
> SCENE EXT/INT DAY OWEN HOUSE/SERVANTS’ QUARTERS
88 / 44.17 / MONTAGE EDITS JOHANNA TIPTOES PAST MARYANN AS SHE POLISHES BOOT THEN CONTINUES TO EDGAR’S COVERED CHAMBER POT AND PLACES FROG INSIDE
JOHANNA RUNS TO EXIT THEN TURNS AS MARYANN SPOTS HER / MARYANN
Johanna! What are you doing here?
JOHANNA
I came to see you, Auntie.
MARYANN (OOS)
But I'll be / 10 06 00 24
89 / 2.10 / LA TILT WMS MARYANN / down for dinner tomorrow night, silly. It’s my night off, remember?
MUSIC 5 ENDS / 10 06 45 16
10 06 45 17
90 / 4.01 / WMS JOHANNA / JOHANNA
I know, but I couldn’t wait. You are my favourite auntie. / 10 06 48 01
91 / 4.08 / LA TILT WMS MARYANN / MARYANN
I'm not stupid, you know. / 10 06 52 02
92 / 2.03 / WMS JOHANNA / MARYANN (OOS)
Now go on. / 10 06 56 10
93 / 2.16 / WMS MARYANN STEPS TOW CAM / MARYANN
Back off to the house. You know the big house is out of bounds. / 10 06 58 13
94 / 4.12 / WMS REV JOHANNA TURNS TO MCU REV MARYANN / MARYANN
Your granny would have a fit if she knew you were here.
JOHANNA
She’s going to have a fit anyway.
MARYANN
Why? / 10 07 01 04
95 / 1.06 / MCU PROFILE MARYANN REACHES LEFT / MARYANN
What have you ... ? / 10 07 05 16
96 / 1.09 / WMS PROFILE JOHANNA AND MCU REV MARYANN / MARYANN
Ohh! / 10 07 06 22
97 / 1.10 / MCU PROFILE MARYANN SNIFFS FINGERS / MARYANN
Johanna! / 10 07 08 06
98 / 1.19 / WMS PROFILE JOHANNA EXITS FROM MS REV MARYANN / MARYANN
Go, now. / 10 07 09 16
99 / 0.22 / WS JOHANNA RUSHES RIGHT AND BUMPS INTO GEORGE / 10 07 11 10
100 / 3.09 / WMS JOHANNA BUMPS GEORGE / JOHANNA
George!
GEORGE
What you doing here, Johanna? / 10 07 12 07
101 / 1.17 / WMS PROFILE JOHANNA AND GEORGE / JOHANNA
What are you doing here? / 10 07 15 16
102 / 2.21 / WMS GEORGE AND MS REV JOHANNA TURN / MARYANN (OOS)
Right in here, sir, with the others.
JOHN (OOS)
I don’t want them with the others, / 10 07 17 08
103 / 1.21 / WS JOHANNA AND GEORGE EXIT SHOT / I want them outside the stables. / 10 07 20 04
> SCENE EXT DAY TRACK TO MY PLACE HOUSE
104 / 4.07 / LA TILT WS PROFILE JOHANNA RUNS LEFT OVER GRASS / GRANNY SARAH (OOS)
I just don’t understand / 10 07 22 00
> SCENE INT DAY MY PLACE HOUSE
105 / 8.03 / PULL BACK OVER JOHANNA AT MIRROR DRYING HAIR AS GRANNY SARAH WALKS TOW BG / how you get yourself into these situations.
JOHANNA
It’s not my fault. That Owen boy was teasing me about my hair.
GRANNY SARAH
How many times have I told you, you ... / 10 07 26 07
106 / 1.23 / WMS JOHANNA HOLDING MIRROR / GRANNY SARAH & JOHANNA (IN UNISON)
... must turn the other cheek! / 10 07 34 10
107 / 1.19 / LA TILT WMS GRANNY SARAH STRAIGHTENS / JOHANNA (OOS)
It’s unfair. / 10 07 36 08
108 / 2.11 / LA TILT MCU PROFILE JOHANNA / JOHANNA
Stupid Christabel’s hair is just as red as mine, / 10 07 38 02
109 / 2.14 / LA TILT WMS GRANNY SARAH WALKS TO MS REV JOHANNA / but no one says anything about her. / 10 07 40 13